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After a few trials and already getting feedback (THANK YOU) still feels off… I think i just feel off LOL
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Where has 2022 gone? Too fast for me. So far this year we have been learning from Retreat Leaders Live interviews. Been Dreaming in the Daylight – bringing your retreat plan into reality. And I have been working with dozens of transformational leaders to build their retreat based businesses.
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* that has developed a program/content for client transformation.
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Oh yes – The FB/LI is much easier cuz I know who is engaged there 😉 And will post it to all my groups that always ask to post offers and I am a paid member of, etc….
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Really Good, I would recommend a few changes.
(((I think this is a minor flip but a little clearer))) “So far this year we have been learning from Retreat Leaders Live interviews. Been bringing your retreat plan into reality during our Dreaming in the Daylight, and I have been working with dozens of transformational leaders to build their retreat-based businesses.”
(((Do you have, seems like it might be a bit passive, I think you can be a little more direct)))
Do you have the What’s your capacity to add new income to your business?Do you have a What’s your vision of increasing your impact and gaining more clients with retreats?
Become a Founder in my new Retreat Roadmap IMPACT experience where leaders/entrepreneurs/CEOS learn/create/implement to learn, create & implement in-person events they enjoy, profit from, and can replicate with clarity, and ease. (((Or break this into 2-3 sentences, you might be losing some of the emotional power by over-condensing)))
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During this one-on-one experience (typically, 4 hours, that YOU set the schedule for), using my signature IMPACT Retreat Roadmap, we will:(((Is this a single 4 hr session, 4 one hour sessions, or some other combination? Is there a time frame on how long this can take? 1 month, 1 yr, 5 years?- what does “you set the schedule for” mean)))
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Again – I so appreciate your insight!!!!
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Hi @amyttravs-com – I like this version much better! Good job. Let’s get it sent out and see what happens. Will you also tweak this for a FB/LI post?