Amy Flo-Yo

NancyChen

• 1 year, 11 months ago

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BOLD QUALIFIERS: IDEAL Asian Woman Leader CLIENT

For Asian Women Only:
Make Some NOISE with Your True VOICE!
How to Build Influence and Impact at Work

A Transformative Virtual Group Experience – in 5 Days

EXPECT TO:

1. Call Out and CRUSH your Worst Saboteur
2. Get CLEAR about What you are Not Voicing that…Read More

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- JoelElfman
  1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Hi Nancy, This is really good for almost any coach. You have a target audience, and you only call out Asian issues in #2, and only very generically. I would go for more specific emotional impact. You’ve experienced hitting some vision of the bamboo ceiling at least once (or more than once), you were told to be quiet, when you knew you shouldn’t,…Read More
  - NancyChen
    1 year, 11 months ago
    
    Really good input, Joel, thanks! I’m taking away: target their pain a bit more specifically, pointedly; integrate the content of the points so they align and refer/confirm each other. And lastly, the Club idea — I’ve been thinking invite into the club after they’ve had a few initial touches first, yes? Perhaps the free talk, then enroll into my…Read More
    - JoelElfman
      1 year, 11 months ago
      
      Glad I could help. Sounds like you’ve got some nice pieces to work on. I think you can phrase it so K-A LFC is aspirational, and not immediate. If you want your ideal client to be in the club, then maybe you want to give them something to move toward. Look at how other folks do it. I’m sure there is better phrasing, abut something like. “Do the…Read More
TanyaEasterling

• 2 years ago

Good Afternoon all! @stephaniesoulfulgrowthhealthcoach-com, @tinabeheardbevalued-com

Myth: Less than 1% write-off’s is Industry Standard
FACT: Less than 1% write-off’s is BULLSHIT!

Fact: It is EASY to hide missing revenue because providers do not fact check
Fact: When the total revenue numbers are run; less than 1% is EXTREMLY unr…Read More

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- Stephanie Zoernack
  2 years ago
  
  You’ve come so far since we chatted in the breakout room! It sounds great to me, how’s it feel to you?
  - TanyaEasterling
    2 years ago
    
    It feels a bit unfinished, but on the right track if that makes sense!!
Malinda Baum

• 2 years ago

Happy Saturday all!! I have posted my video on FB and LI. I would greatly appreciate it if you would take a moment and show it some love in one of those.…Read More

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- TracyKim
  2 years ago
  
  Love the video. Really like to brick wall background!!!
  - Malinda Baum
    2 years ago
    
    Thank you, Tracy the image is part of my “poster”
Malinda Baum

• 2 years ago

Ok, so taking action and would love feedback @nancychen1gmail-com, @brhwcoachinggmail-com, @amymshannonhernandez-com… Thanks

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- Amy Flo-Yo
  2 years ago
  
  I love it – quick, powerful and needed. I read and process VERY quickly so it was ok for me… but I can see how it might be “too fast” for others to keep up with.
  - AmyHager
    2 years ago
    
    I totally couldn’t keep up with the words. But, the messaging is very powerful.
    - AmyHager
      2 years ago
      
      I slowed it down to .75 and it was really easy.
      Also, the crash sound effect is too early. Hold it for when you put the 40% fact on the screen.
  - Malinda Baum
    2 years ago
    
    Thanks! very helpful… adjustments will be made and posted today!!
  - Malinda Baum
    2 years ago
    
    Thank you @aslcivicagmail-com, love the feedback!
  - Malinda Baum
    2 years ago
    
    <3
- JoelElfman
  2 years ago
  
  Malinda, this is really good. Possible small considerations for tweaking. I’m with Amy H on the timing of the Breaking Glass. Although I might go further, and right after you shatter the glass, I would consider changing the language to 40% of trafficking is Male. You’ve shattered the glass for the reveal, For me, the extra panel to get “Male” did…Read More
  - Malinda Baum
    2 years ago
    
    Thanks, Joel, I have been on the search for a GIF that would work for that exact spot… no luck yet though =(. I may post without it and then on the next one add that!
    - JoelElfman
      2 years ago
      
      nothing on giphy. Too bad. If it’s important, I wonder what it would cost on Fivver or some other place to make. Good Luck!
- NancyChen
  2 years ago
  
  Nice multimedia piece, Malida! What if you start with”Myth: Sex trafficking is a girls……” then “Fact: it’s a boys ,…” because the word ‘Myth’ might keep me reading, whereas I may not otherwise ( I already know trafficking is a girl issue). Also the end, how about a quick phrase about what your #film is raising $$ for (a doc on ….. X% goes…Read More
  - Malinda Baum
    2 years ago
    
    Thank you for the feedback… more videos to come!
- Nancy Jackson
  2 years ago
  
  Great job, loved this and very emotive and powerful!
  - Malinda Baum
    2 years ago
    
    Thanks, Nancy!!
JoelElfman

• 2 years ago

MythBuster v2 –“Strong Willpower Will Always Trump Emotions”

Fact 1 – Your unconscious is about 100X faster than your conscious mind. Whatever exercise of will you wanted to make is long gone, before willpower can stop it. Basically, your horse is off to the races, and crossing the finish line, before you can even grab the reins. And way too o…Read More

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- Malinda Baum
  2 years ago
  
  Hi Joel, will you have a visual that goes with the text?
  - JoelElfman
    2 years ago
    
    Hi Malinda, I hadn’t originally considered a visual, I was going to test recording it. I do like your idea though. I could imagine perhaps a horse drawing or two to illustrate. Thanks for the suggestion.
- NancyChen
  2 years ago
  
  Hi Joel! Wonder if using simpler, conversational words would make your piece even more powerful? Win over vs trumps; power through, knee jerk reactions vs anticipatory. Simplify and tighten it up perhaps? Also, perhaps refining your viewpoint; often willpower can only get you so far; then what? Seriously, consider HYPNOSIS — and why? FACT:…Read More
  - JoelElfman
    2 years ago
    
    Hi Nancy, Thanks for the excellent feedback. I will be put it to good use.
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