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My Industry Myths….Do my facts make sense?
Myth: If you could just eat less and exercise more it would solve all your body blues!Let me clarify; I say ‘blues” because it’s time we stop saying our body has a “problem” or is “broken”
Fact: Our thoughts are the strongest part of our body system. When your thoughts are about how you are b…Read More
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Who is in your Zoom Mate pod this month?
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Amy Flo-Yo and Carolyn Romano
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This is awesome! Be sure to post as a written post AND then do a video on the same content. Let’s see which performs better.
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and email?
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Great – you are going to want to tag them to review this!
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sure – send in email too!
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Hi Amy C, this is really strong. My favorite fact, followed by your CTA are genius. Of the Facts, the 90% for me was the strongest. I would consider moving that into 1st FACT position. And move the thoughts to the bottom or somewhere below. I have a minor disconnect with the title, I feel like either. the “all” should come out or “blues” becomes…Read More
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thank you Joel
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PSA 3 – I re-recorded this because I realized that I default to a tendency to educate/explain vs. activate/attract and engage. It is an important lesson for me to remember. Also ruminating on your feedback to turn the heat up; e.g., is there a more ‘appropriate’ way to do this on Linkedin vs. FB? (Never got a Twitter account — sounds to me like a…Read More
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Hola! No need for Twitter. 🙂
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Good job on lessening the educate/explain and pivoting more toward activate/attract/engage. You are great on video. I looked at the whole post on LI – there are so many calls to action in the text I actually didnt’ know what to do. When you look back at that post, can you see it now that I have mentioned it? If you were to post this video again -…Read More
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Thanks, Shannon. Now I see I may have several CTAs in this piece: take this quiz, answer this question, and the ASK to contact me for a 15 minute talk. That last CTA should be the ONE to focus on, YES? Maybe include the others in future posts? Thanks.
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Hi Nancy! Sorry for my late reply here. I watched both the takes, the one on YouTube and Linked In. Great job!! The copy is nice and tight, and I feel like it will resonate with your target audience. When I watched the youtube video, I sped it up to 1.25, and felt like that helped the flow and increased the “pep”, but of course the pauses…Read More
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Hi Nancy, Sorry for my late reply as well. You are getting better, and I’m going to echo Jessica’s thoughts on some of the pacing. And there are really brilliant places in this video like “the Kick-Ass Lotus Blossom Club” and when you talk about your client & your father hanging up the phone These are wonderful examples of where your tonality &…Read More
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Hi Nancy, thanks for your most recent comments on my PSA. Watching and reading your latest. I think this is very well done. There are a few places where I might edit or switch statement vs. question or the other way around. I think you are getting more relaxed, more natural, and there was a wider emotional range in your voice in this video. Ray…Read More
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Thanks, Joel; good food for thought. My goal is to BOTH start building an audience of leads and prospects within my target profile of women and Asian women leaders. It sounds like a good next step for me may be to record a couple of different versions with a range of tones, strong to neutral, and ask my current and past clients for their…Read More
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Glad to help!
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Hey Nancy! What feedback are you looking for specifically? Can you ask a couple of questions to guide us as we watch? That will be super helpful.
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Here’s my video on Linkedin, in case the youtube video is not accessible. Thanks for feedback!
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Hi Amy! We are working on tagging and trying to get it set up so we can tag the name. Right now it is tagged by email address – which is not so helpful.