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After a few trials and already getting feedback (THANK YOU) still feels off… I think i just feel off LOL
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Where has 2022 gone? Too fast for me. So far this year we have been learning from Retreat Leaders Live interviews. Been Dreaming in the Daylight -…Read More
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Oh yes – The FB/LI is much easier cuz I know who is engaged there 😉 And will post it to all my groups that always ask to post offers and I am a paid member of, etc….
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Really Good, I would recommend a few changes.
(((I think this is a minor flip but a little clearer))) “So far this year we have been learning from Retreat Leaders Live interviews. Been bringing your retreat plan into reality during our Dreaming in the Daylight, and I have been working with dozens of transformational leaders to build their r…Read More
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Again – I so appreciate your insight!!!!
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Here is my invitation:
Do you have a vision of increasing your impact and gaining more clients with retreats?
If so, I would like to work with you in my IMPACT Retreat Roadmap Experience. I have three spots open for this
summer.
You would be a great fit if you are an established thought leader/coach
• that has developed a p…Read More2 Comments-
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Third bullet gramer: • You want to increase your impact and income WITH intention.
The 3 step process is very clear. Good work!
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I think it’s clear and would grab the attention of coaches wanting to do retreats.
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I think I have my next hook/title: Payment Plans are for Pussies!
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Hmmm. I’m curious what the general outline of your content is. Honestly, it feels a bit harsh to me, and I’m not a person who needs payment plans…it is a turn off for me, but may have redeeming value with the content. Certainly gets the attention!! Much love!!
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LOL I know I am still playing with it. feels a little too much “click bait” but I have been leaning into being bolder (as I am a VERY bold personality) the content is Payment plans are fine if you use them for the right reasons. But NOT if you are using them as a sales tactic to get interest. About knowing and owning your value!
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It has been fun to read all the PSAs….. I am still not sure which way to look at it.
Thinking of :
PSA – any travel advisor who says they can book “anything” isn’t a good travel advisor!
As a travel advisor, I have ACCESS to book anything.
That doesn’t mean I SHOULD book anything. Travel is very individualized and innately knowing the…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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The opening hook, isn’t grabbing me. Go bolder, “A travel advisor who says they can book anything, might as well point you at Expedia”, or just try a different headline. “Is your travel advisor, a generalist or a specialist”. That gets me curious about what a specialist is. A good travel advisor is what? going to save you time, money, &/or create…Read More
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ONCE AGAIN – Many Thanks!
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Great outline Amy! I’m thinking a bolder intro – perhaps something like – has your travel advisor ever even traveled? And maybe a bit more detail about how the average person is being misled when making travel arrangements. You clearly make it a more personal/connection – taking the time to get to know them, and I’m sure not many actually do that.…Read More
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OHHH Nancy – so good! Thank you.
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Great job, Amy!! Love your stance, and great other feedback. I immediately thought about drumming up an image of the “magic” of travel as an opening statement…. What makes travel magical? As a travel agent, you have a finger on that pulse, I really don’t, but when I’ve booked with an agent vs on my own, I’ve found my travel to be richer. My…Read More
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Jessica I love that … can I use that as a quote?
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Of course!!
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Amy – love this. And I remembered what I wanted to share in the club this week. Something like this, for an opener: Do you want a trusted travel advisor that sells travel or AN UNFORGETTABLE EXPERIENCE?
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Hi @amyttravs-com – I like this version much better! Good job. Let’s get it sent out and see what happens. Will you also tweak this for a FB/LI post?