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Good Afternoon friends! I’ve posted my long form and a link to the video for how the Revenue PI came to be.
Hey Hey! My name is Tanya, and today I wanted to introduce myself and tell you the story of how The Revenue PI came to be.
The medical field has been near and dear to my heart for as long as I can remember. As a kid, I wanted to be a…Read More
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I love how you combined the two versions like we talked about in the club meeting, this is so much better and has much more emotion than the one I listened to Wednesday. I didn’t watch this video version, just read it, but I think it’s great!
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I love this!
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Here is step 2 of the message, the story outline:
Immigrating to Canada, I had the language skills after a two-year certification as a foreign language correspondent. While I could perform oral business translations, I did not dare to talk to people. During the full-time programme, the goal was perfection. However, we never practiced improvised…Read More
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Great draft – my recommendation would you warm this up with wayyy more emotion (I know this is hard for some cultures). Here’s a rewrite so you get the gist:
I was so afraid of everyone thinking I was stupid, that I practiced my new language with our puppy–who I knew would not be judgemental and would be willing to listen! After immigrating to…Read More
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Thanks, Shannon, I see what you mean. I will see what I can do.
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I’m wondering if you can also make a joke about the puppy’s conversation improving as well.
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@Joel, that is not a bad idea. I will see if I can add that.
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Second draft:
When I immigrated to Canada, I had the language skills to thrive in my new country after a two-year certification as a foreign language correspondent. While I could confidently perform oral business translations, I did not dare to talk to people. During the full-time programme, the goal was perfection. However, we never practiced…Read More
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Do you need a little extra support with your content creation? Come hang out with fellow Content Personality Club students to talk through anything that keeps you from putting your messages out. This session on the fourth Wednesday of the month is not hosted by Shannon or Amy.
Here is the link to my personal zoom sessions for you:Topic: 4 Th…Read More
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As some members mentioned the have a time conflict on the 4th Wednesday, is there another time that would suit you?
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Does anyone plan to come tomorrow to the 4 Th Wednesday Community Cooperation?
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Reworking my vision statement from May:
I believe the combination of language and art instruction for German learners in a supportive community facilitates studying, enriches their lives and promotes understanding.
I would love some feedback. I teach German by using simple art projects to visualize new content to help memorization and…Read More
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Good job! What about this (looking to warm this up a little): I believe German learners learn best with a combination of language + art instruction–in a highly supportive community.
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Thanks, Shannon. It is exactly my vision.
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After a few trials and already getting feedback (THANK YOU) still feels off… I think i just feel off LOL
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Where has 2022 gone? Too fast for me. So far this year we have been learning from Retreat Leaders Live interviews. Been Dreaming in the Daylight -…Read More
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Hi @amyttravs-com – I like this version much better! Good job. Let’s get it sent out and see what happens. Will you also tweak this for a FB/LI post?
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Oh yes – The FB/LI is much easier cuz I know who is engaged there 😉 And will post it to all my groups that always ask to post offers and I am a paid member of, etc….
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Really Good, I would recommend a few changes.
(((I think this is a minor flip but a little clearer))) “So far this year we have been learning from Retreat Leaders Live interviews. Been bringing your retreat plan into reality during our Dreaming in the Daylight, and I have been working with dozens of transformational leaders to build their r…Read More
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Again – I so appreciate your insight!!!!
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I think this is brilliant