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DIRECT OFFER EMAIL – Draft 1
Used the magic word, “repeatable”!
Comments invited!Hello ,
Do you want to build more influence at work so that you can reach your goals?
If so, I would like to work with you in my PILOT Leadership Program designed for Asian women. This group program delivers the same system that has transformed many…Read More
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I would remove the word PILOT. You know what you are doing and you can help these women. Adding Pilot makes this seem like it isn’t real. Like you are experimenting and not the leader you really are.
The special benefits – like bonus coaching – is something that you can gift people once they are in. The feedback will happen because you build…Read More-
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Thanks for your feedback, Amy – it’s making more sense to me now.
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Nice work Nancy.
CAN BEING ASIAN SABOTAGE YOUR CAREER? (Not crazy about this title. Is this about their DNA, their cultural beliefs or others beliefs about Asians. Which one or ones are you addressing)
I would make sure you hammer home, Who this is for, Asian woman, and Why, cultural heritage. Make sure they feel this is tailored to them, and…Read More
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Here are the results from taking part in my Summer Conversation Sessions:
1) You will become more comfortable and confident speaking German to be an engaged participant in conversations.
2) You will increase your vocabulary for small talk and feel part of the conversations.
3) You will connect and practice with other learners to feel supported…Read More2 Comments-
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For #1 I’d maybe say You will comfortably and confidently engage in conversations with those who speak German.
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Thanks, Annette.
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TAKE #2 – 3 results….
Here’s the results for my 1-1 Coaching program (12 months) — input pls … Working with me you will…
1. co-create & implement a VISIBILITY ROADMAP which ensures that you STAND OUT as the undeniable authority in your field so you magnetize dream clients with ease (without paid ads and perhaps without social med…Read More
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1) I would say …” without paid ads and even social media”. Your clients can still use any or both, but you give them options to succeed without these tools. 2) Do you only work with entrepreneurs who already have a team? If I read this, I assume it is not for solopreneurs. 3) “… to pay yourself and your team competitively. You might even…Read More
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Thanks so much Kerstin!!!
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#3 — Optimize your business model and metrics in your PROFIT Plan that will uncover hidden profit leaks and where you might be leaving money on the table.
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Uncover hidden profit leaks and where you might be leaving money on the table so we can optimize your PROFIT Plan for the future.
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I might change the second point to use a comma after bottleneck and then ‘allowing you the freedom you truly desire.’
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Here is my invitation:
Do you have a vision of increasing your impact and gaining more clients with retreats?
If so, I would like to work with you in my IMPACT Retreat Roadmap Experience. I have three spots open for this
summer.
You would be a great fit if you are an established thought leader/coach
• that has developed a p…Read More2 Comments-
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Third bullet gramer: • You want to increase your impact and income WITH intention.
The 3 step process is very clear. Good work!
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![Profile picture of Annette Presley]()
I think it’s clear and would grab the attention of coaches wanting to do retreats.
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Here’s the results for my 1-1 Coaching program (12 maths) — input pls
1. co-create & implement a VISIBILITY ROADMAP which differentiates you as the undeniable authority in your field so you magnetize dream clients with ease (without paid ads and perhaps without social media)
2. maximize your profits (not just your revenue) with systems,…Read More2 Comments-
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#3 you lost me. This feels more like a “how” = support & feedback. What is the result of #3.
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Agree with Amy #3 is about YOU and your guidance, not their result….
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Forgot the title: CAN BEING ASIAN SABOTAGE YOUR CAREER?