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DIRECT OFFER EMAIL – Draft 1
Used the magic word, “repeatable”!
Comments invited!Hello ,
Do you want to build more influence at work so that you can reach your goals?
If so, I would like to work with you in my PILOT Leadership Program designed for Asian women. This group program delivers the same system that has transformed many…Read More
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I would remove the word PILOT. You know what you are doing and you can help these women. Adding Pilot makes this seem like it isn’t real. Like you are experimenting and not the leader you really are.
The special benefits – like bonus coaching – is something that you can gift people once they are in. The feedback will happen because you build…Read More-
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Thanks for your feedback, Amy – it’s making more sense to me now.
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Nice work Nancy.
CAN BEING ASIAN SABOTAGE YOUR CAREER? (Not crazy about this title. Is this about their DNA, their cultural beliefs or others beliefs about Asians. Which one or ones are you addressing)
I would make sure you hammer home, Who this is for, Asian woman, and Why, cultural heritage. Make sure they feel this is tailored to them, and…Read More
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Here are the results from taking part in my Summer Conversation Sessions:
1) You will become more comfortable and confident speaking German to be an engaged participant in conversations.
2) You will increase your vocabulary for small talk and feel part of the conversations.
3) You will connect and practice with other learners to feel supported…Read More2 Comments-
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For #1 I’d maybe say You will comfortably and confidently engage in conversations with those who speak German.
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Thanks, Annette.
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Feedback on this business card draft?? Putting qualifiers right up front.
Yeah it’s busy… but if the objective is to define the message and then shout it out there….. QR code goes right to my free consult scheduling page.
(Also added the checkbox “OK to add to email list” when booking!)![]()
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This is a great example of how else to BOLD Qualifiers in a new way! Susan, if you want to share this image in the big FB group under our interview from last week – that would be awesome. https://www.facebook.com/1131797962/videos/347375547561171/
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Done! Thanks Amy
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I like it!
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Had a consult call yesterday – first time I have spoken with someone where I said right up front that my single session is no longer for sale… that the longer program is needed to get results! I used my bold qualifiers to describe the people who achieve the best results from working with me. He and his wife took lots of notes and were…Read More
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Susan – well done! A great reminder that bold qualifiers help us take the BEST stand for our clients’ success!
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Establish a long except a clear, long term vision or have the ability to see how today’s money decision effects your long term vision.
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Here is the draft for my BOLD qualifiers. I would love your feedback.
Imagine you travel to Germany and can start a conversation with a native speaker without a translator. Think about how it feels when you communicate to get to know someone. Maybe, you remember a situation when a foreigner addressed you in your mother tongue. How did it…Read More
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you are ready to have fun and commit to actively participating in the programme, – instead of mentioning actively participating in the program… what is the results they get from having fun and actively participating?
Or try you are ready to have fun and commit to actively grow your German vocabulary-
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Only when they are ready to participate will they learn to speak the language. Students often learn lots of vocabulary and worry about grammar but forget that the purpose of learning a language is to speak it.
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Forgot the title: CAN BEING ASIAN SABOTAGE YOUR CAREER?