Charlotte Allen

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I’m doing an upcoming workshop w/ a friend. It is a guided meditation & energetic healing. So I thought I would experiment w/ using the Nov format to promote. Energy is sometimes, a hard concept to easily quantify or make understandable for the masses, but I thought I would take a shot at it. I did my best. I encourage…Read More

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Brenda Uekert
1 year, 11 months ago

I got bogged down in the intro. Read it 3 times and I’m still not sure what it says. Do you need the energetically in the second sentence – You are unconsciously blocked by past trauma and events.

You are missing “years” from the next sentence, “For over 5,000 [years]. . . And I’m a cynic. When you say that Western science has caught up, it feels…Read More
- JoelElfman
  1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Hi Brenda,
  Thank you very much for your comments. Since it is an event combining guided meditation & energetic healing, I feel like the energetically is needed but I will consider it further.
  I was thinking that “Western science has caught up…” the other way, that Eastern philosophy was way ahead and we are only beginning to catch up. I guess…Read More
  - Brenda Uekert
    1 year, 11 months ago
    
    Hey Joel – your audience may very well be in tune with the concepts. I’m reading this as an “outsider,” so you might want to try it out on a few fans who are better informed of your offerings.
    - JoelElfman
      1 year, 11 months ago
      
      Hi Brenda, thanks again for your suggestions. I was trying to expand the audience, but it might be more challenging than I thought.
BethShenton
1 year, 11 months ago

I really love the work you are doing, Joel. All the up front descriptions feel heavy, though I get why you want to share the detail there. Interested to see any edits you made, if you want to share them!
- JoelElfman
  1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Hi Beth, thanks for your encouraging note. I was trying to widen the audience but I don’t have quite right yet. This one may have to stick w/ folks more familiar w/ energy work. I will either share something tomorrow or just get it out the door.

Susanlazar hart
1 year, 11 months ago

Hi Joel, Could you give Her a name- would feel more relatable, personal ; Amy came to me because she felt stuck….. I like the strength of this- ask if you need to put in everyones experience is different- fels like it waters this down
- JoelElfman
  1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Hi Susan, Thank you for your suggestions. I actually did give her a name before I launched it yesterday. And next time I will take out the everybody’s experience is different. Thanks again.

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