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Not sure it’s my final draft, but I’d love feedback on this. I can’t make the live call this week. My resource is 5 Hidden Reasons for Pet Behavior, and my target audience are Pet Moms (and maybe some Dads) who are stressed out or whose life has been affected (limited what they do) due to their pet’s behavior. I struggled a bit because I don’t…Read More
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Really nice CTA with “Please reply LOVE MY PETS so I know you’re feeling good about being here, too.”
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I love the idea of “Heart Centered Pet Parents” as a community – that’s GREAT
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Hi! I’d love feed back on my last email to my list. This was a follow up email to my email from last month’s content on how past experience helps me in the work I do now. The subject line was Understanding can CHANGE pet behavior. Here is the link: https://www.blairhope.com/so/6eOz5bi-e?languageTag=en Thank you!
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@helloblairhope-com – great email. Love all the tidbits about the pets you have helped. The layout of the email is easy to read. How was this received? What response did you get?
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I love this newsletter! The stories are so compelling. And I like the teaser about “stay tuned”. Well done @helloblairhope-com!
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Here is my landing page for the lead conversion tool that was created from April’s Lead Magnet Workshop. I have connected everything and the delivery emails have been written and timed out. I would love your thoughts and feedback. (I am still working on the mobile responsive settings)…Read More
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I love how clean this page feels, and the graphic you have of the two head really feels like tangled to smooth! I also love the title of your LCT. Most of your page seems to be clear on who it is for and how this helps. The only part I was not sure about was this: My ultimate mission is to empower women-owned small businesses and entrepreneurs to…Read More
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Hi @carriewulfdenprofessionalsolutions-com – good job. LOVE the graphic at the top and the promise/transformation of the resource. I did get lost on the page, there is a lot going on there. What can be SIMPLIFIED and removed? And remember a landing page has no other menu items/social icons, CTA on the page. I’m including a link to our landing page…Read More
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Here’s the sign up page for Ride the Waves with Anthea – https://dreamteamconsulting.ca/ridethewaves. I’m doing it as a give back to the entrepreneurial community – occasionally and perhaps in the future I will have events/offers, but my main intent right now is to help business owners to succeed by sharing my insights and wisdom from my own…Read More
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Your landing page looks great. Is there a way that you could align your boxes towards the bottom with the blue checkmarks that talk about the benefits of your list? It could just be a “me” thing, but the out-of-alignment looks a bit wonky on my screen. I did sign up but have not received any kind of confirmation I’m on your list type of email.
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Hay @carriewulfdenprofessionalsolutions-com thanks – it’s been revised now. And, my VA confirmed you were added to my list. Did my email go to your spam folder perhaps?
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@antheadreamteamconsulting-ca – Hi! In addition to what Carrie said about putting all 4 boxes on the bottom row, I think you moving the first two sections to the top (Consider my invitation and when you sign up) and then moving the Who you are section at the top to the third placement. Remember, this is about them first.
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Thanks @clientsmshannonhernandez-com. Updates done!
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Here’s the email that went to my list last week. It was inspired at the story telling event in Miami – and Shannon came up with the headline for me when I shared it with the group. And, Amy was the facilitator who came to my rescue!
Subject line – Lonely, Lost and Late. Preview line – Can You Relate?
Its late April 2024. I’m wal…Read More
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I love how you tied your story into why people would value your in person retreat that offers an opportunity to connect with others.
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Hey Blair, thanks so much!
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approved. did you send this out? how was the response?
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Yes, last week – 46 per cent open rate – no responses to write me back for details yet though….
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@helloblairhope-com I LOVE THIS. Great job on making it feel like you. It feels warm and welcome! And I’m so happy you think of your email as a community now – people are looking for places to bon and belong. <3