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Would you rather take a Business Self-Assessment or a Business Freedom Audit? (my lead magnet) FYI – I help Chief Everything Officers stop getting stuck in the day to day running of their business and step into their true role of Visionary CEO so they can build a self-running biz engine.
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I don’t love the word audit – it has a negative connotation for me, so I prefer the first option.
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Freedom is more powerful for me
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I also like the word freedom. Business Self-Assessment seems vague to me. I”m not sure what the purpose of that assessment would be (from the title).
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Freedom for me!
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Below is my 4 part nurture sequence and I could use an extra pair of eyeballs just to make sure it is pretty clear. There is no formatting on the wall so sorry if it’s a lot to read visually.
Email 1 DRAFT (WD) : Lead Magnet + Quick Intro
Subject Line: FNAME, nice to meet you!
Preview: [Connected Speakers]Note: Send immediately upon…Read More
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I have had to come back and read these a few times. I think the flow is good. I also like your PS in email 2.
For email 3, go with this subject line: What to expect here.-
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Thanks Amy – will do
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Not sure it’s my final draft, but I’d love feedback on this. I can’t make the live call this week. My resource is 5 Hidden Reasons for Pet Behavior, and my target audience are Pet Moms (and maybe some Dads) who are stressed out or whose life has been affected (limited what they do) due to their pet’s behavior. I struggled a bit because I don’t…Read More
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@helloblairhope-com I LOVE THIS. Great job on making it feel like you. It feels warm and welcome! And I’m so happy you think of your email as a community now – people are looking for places to bon and belong. <3
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Really nice CTA with “Please reply LOVE MY PETS so I know you’re feeling good about being here, too.”
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I love the idea of “Heart Centered Pet Parents” as a community – that’s GREAT
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Hi! I’d love feed back on my last email to my list. This was a follow up email to my email from last month’s content on how past experience helps me in the work I do now. The subject line was Understanding can CHANGE pet behavior. Here is the link: https://www.blairhope.com/so/6eOz5bi-e?languageTag=en Thank you!
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@helloblairhope-com – great email. Love all the tidbits about the pets you have helped. The layout of the email is easy to read. How was this received? What response did you get?
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I love this newsletter! The stories are so compelling. And I like the teaser about “stay tuned”. Well done @helloblairhope-com!
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Here is my landing page for the lead conversion tool that was created from April’s Lead Magnet Workshop. I have connected everything and the delivery emails have been written and timed out. I would love your thoughts and feedback. (I am still working on the mobile responsive settings)…Read More
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I love how clean this page feels, and the graphic you have of the two head really feels like tangled to smooth! I also love the title of your LCT. Most of your page seems to be clear on who it is for and how this helps. The only part I was not sure about was this: My ultimate mission is to empower women-owned small businesses and entrepreneurs to…Read More
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Hi @carriewulfdenprofessionalsolutions-com – good job. LOVE the graphic at the top and the promise/transformation of the resource. I did get lost on the page, there is a lot going on there. What can be SIMPLIFIED and removed? And remember a landing page has no other menu items/social icons, CTA on the page. I’m including a link to our landing page…Read More
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If I think back to my earlier days, freedom for sure!