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Here is my revised first email. Sending it today! Feedback appreciated because I want to write the other three.
SubJ: Barking or behavior still causing stress?If your dog’s barking or reactions are making life stressful, even though you’ve tried to get them to be calm and trust…
….it may be because there are hidden reasons for their behavio…Read More4 Comments-
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Agreed
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@lisajohnsvagmail-com and @jaini-shah15gmail-com– Thanks for your feedback! The problem from the client’s pov is that their dog is barking and reacting, and that causes them stress. Definitely the person’s reaction to the behavior is also causing stress and I help them with this during my program, but I have discovered that my clients consistently…Read More
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Jaini, you are getting SOOOOO good at messaging. Keep it up!
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I need to look at the sample email Shannon shared when it is posted in the notes from today, but here is my starting draft:
Subj line: Dog’s barking behavior still driving you crazy?
If your dog is still driving you crazy with their barking, making your home, walks, or outings stressful ….
It may be because
• They feel threatened or phy…Read More1 Comment-
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Your “may be because” feels unclear for me. What if you re-wrote it to:
1. they actually feel threatened and don’t know how else to tell you (even if you see no actual threat)
2. You are accidentally sending a message you expect them to bark
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Hi! I finally have my Lead Converstion Tool finished – Get To The Vet With Less Stress – and I”d love feedback. Video is my content personality so I included video. Here is the link:
My target audience are Pet Moms (and Dads are welcome, my focus is just usually Moms because the energy is often…Read More
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This is so clear and such a focused pain point. Good clarity, Blair
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Thank you!
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Here is my draft. I decided to start over because I want to get my Calm & Pets: Storm and Fireworks program out for 4th of July /summer. Some of this was bolded and I can’t figure out how to make it bold here.
I’d love feedback. It may be too long. Thanks!
Hook: Is your pet afraid of storms or fireworks?
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Hi, Blair! I like the flow of your piece very much, especially how you note the FEELING of helplessness when your pet is afraid.
The flow is great, but feels like it could be tightened up a bit. (perhaps consolidate the What I discovered and what I figured out sections?
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Thanks Dan for your feedback!
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This might be giving away a little too much. Is there anything you feel you can pull back on in V2 that will give them clarity that they need your help?
One suggestion is to replace this phrase: So I created a technique that anyone can quickly
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Thanks, I am cutting a lot and changing that language. Good idea!
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Not sure it’s my final draft, but I’d love feedback on this. I can’t make the live call this week. My resource is 5 Hidden Reasons for Pet Behavior, and my target audience are Pet Moms (and maybe some Dads) who are stressed out or whose life has been affected (limited what they do) due to their pet’s behavior. I struggled a bit because I don’t…Read More
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@helloblairhope-com I LOVE THIS. Great job on making it feel like you. It feels warm and welcome! And I’m so happy you think of your email as a community now – people are looking for places to bon and belong. <3
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Really nice CTA with “Please reply LOVE MY PETS so I know you’re feeling good about being here, too.”
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I love the idea of “Heart Centered Pet Parents” as a community – that’s GREAT
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I’d look to turn the first line around into the want- like “If you’re not feeling calm and trusting around your dog’s reactions”. Or something like that so one can read what it is that they want, rather than what they are currently experiencing, if that makes sense?