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@amymshannonhernandez-com and @clientsmshannonhernandez-com tagging you as it’s really quiet here in the forum and would love to get momentum on this and get my welcome sequence out. So please share your feedback as we wait for community members
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Hi ladies. I just watched the replay of the “Transformation Statement To Book Sales Calls” and I wrote out one email. I would love some feedback before I do the 3 others to make sure I’m on the right track @amymshannonhernandez-com @clientsmshannonhernandez-com and community 🙂
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Hi FNAME,If you are not trusting yourself to say yes to…Read More
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see my note below. This is all really big, how can we focus in a little more?
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Hi Jen! Where did you find the transformation statement book a call recording?
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Hi everyone. I just worked on my “I Help” statement and would love some feedback. Per Shannon’s guidance on the training recording, I created it for this specific 1:1 coaching offer I have:
Here it goes: I help people find the courage to trust their gut and heal what is keeping them…Read More
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Always post here, this is our safe community to play in 💜
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Ok great 😉
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This seems really big and is hard for people to grasp on to. “create the change and results they desire”
When you think about your most ideal clients, is there a change or something similar that they all had? For example, our best clients for Joy Fueled are ones who are grown their business with some coaching and support and value the knowledge…Read More-
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Hi @amymshannonhernandez-com Thanks for this. I have a tendancy of being vague and too inclusive lol in my marketing. I guess my best clients have left their corporate/traditional lives to launch their business and own their purpose. I tend to attrack empathic entrepreneurs who don’t trust themselves and are overwhelmed with all they feel they…Read More
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can you take what you dump from your heart and plug it into this framework and the other post you made? When you try to be overly inclusive in your messaging – it doesn’t work. You want someone to feel like you a speaking directly to their heart.
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@amymshannonhernandez-com I think I just had a massive insight tonight. In the last few months it’s become clear that I attract Highly Sensitive Empaths (like me) and when I did the exercise for the Bold Qualifier, the clients were all Empaths.
Then tonight, I was sitting down journaling in The Desire Map writing out my gratitude list for…Read More
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to make this clean… make a new post with this updated draft of I help and Transformation statement
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Hi ladies. I’m so thrilled to finally be here with you all. A big thank you to @clientsmshannonhernandez-com and @amymshannonhernandez-com for gently nurturing me into this space and a BIG thank you to @jaini-shah15gmail-com for helping me on my healing journey to get ready to start this work.
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WHOOO HOOOOO! I went to yoga this AM and came back to see you here 💜
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Ahahaha I also went to yoga this morning but to teach. I’m so excited to finally be here!
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Yay!! So happy to see you here and can’t wait to see your next journey of smashing it in messaging 🤗🤗
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Thank youuuuu @jaini-shah15gmail-com You are one of the reasons I am in here 🙂
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Email Number 4- Does this email speak to those looking to change their health and is it clear that if they sign up for the Masterclass they will have the answers to better health? @amymshannonhernandez-com @clientsmshannonhernandez-com
Subject Line: Do Holidays mean Overeating?
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I think that it is somewhat clear on what the masterclass covers. You might consider taking out the second to last paragraph ( Are you clear….) Clear is used quite a bit at the end of the email you may want to use some other words.
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Thank you! Good point, clear is there a lot, I’ll edit that part 🙂
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Hi @jaini-shah15gmail-com – love this take on holidays and over eating. Can you include in the last paragraph a bulleted list of the 3 takeaways from the workshop?
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Hi Jaini. Thank you for your message.
The Club wall is set up for peer to peer review, and we encourage you to tag 2 or 3 of your peers when you post asking for feedback. This will hopefully get their attention and get conversations going.
As you can imagine, Shannon and I do not review every single posted content in this program, as that is…Read More