Your landing page looks great. Is there a way that you could align your boxes towards the bottom with the blue checkmarks that talk about the benefits of your list? It could just be a “me” thing, but the out-of-alignment looks a bit wonky on my screen. I did sign up but have not received any kind of confirmation I’m on your list type of email.

@antheadreamteamconsulting-ca – Hi! In addition to what Carrie said about putting all 4 boxes on the bottom row, I think you moving the first two sections to the top (Consider my invitation and when you sign up) and then moving the Who you are section at the top to the third placement. Remember, this is about them first.

I like the parallels you draw from kids acting out and our pets acting out. I can feel you passion for help those pet parents. As for your questions about pictures, do you have any before and after pictures? Or a picture of a “helped” pet? I might even include a before and after story of a pet and parent that you helped. That might actually work…Read More

Love this copy and it is so relatable to readers (even those of us who don’t have children). It just makes sense. Well done!

Hi there – thought I would offer some insights that my sister (a 35+ year veterinarian) used to say about pets & kids….. If the kids walked thru the door and were ill mannered i.e. running all over the place, touching everything — then the pets would act similarly! And of course, vice versa was true — if the kids came into the clinic and were…Read More

Your passion and deterination to figure out how to help your daughter definitely translates into your passion for helping your clients, and your interest in getting to know them and their needs so you can best support them too. I loved these lines: I understand your frustration if your programs are all over the…Read More

I love this – SO relatable! Great job on the content and drawing the parallels. Well done. I know your subject line scored high, but it’s best to have 3-5 words max in subject and preview lines. Might want to reconsider that?

Great!!!

Hey Ann – would love to connect as I’m also on a mission to eradicate burn out – but mine is with small business owners, especially women! Hope to see you on a call – I’ve just joined the Club!

Do you want to be more specific to the women leaders you want to empower?

I sent you a message on FB! Let’s chat soon

Good job! What about this (looking to warm this up a little): I believe German learners learn best with a combination of language + art instruction–in a highly supportive community.