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Here is my first draft for the landing page for my three-month beginners course, Learn German Through Art:

Wouldn’t it be great if you could communicate in everyday German?

Learn German Through Art – A German Course Focusing on Everyday Conversations to get you talking with German speakers quickly and confidently

In this interactive c…Read More

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DonnaDube
2 years ago

I like this overall Kerstin, short and to the point. I wonder if you could include something that confirms I do not need to be an “artist” to enjoy this course, and also something to encourage me if I know absolutely “no German” now. Just to clarify who this program is for in a bit more detail.
- AmyHager
  2 years ago
  
  Great questions, Donna!
- KerstinPeters
  2 years ago
  
  Hello Donna, thanks for the suggestion. While I mention it when I talk about my courses, I should add: Are you worried about your artistic skills? If you can draw stick men, you can participate. I don’t teach you how to draw but how to use visual images that help you to remember new vocabulary.
JoelElfman
2 years ago

I like this a lot. It does feel a little cut & dry. May get a little granular. How does the class have fun. Is there a particular fun exercise that you do, would it be okay to mention something about it. I’m wondering if any of your students have some funny stories about a situation where their conversational skill came in handy. Getting…Read More
- KerstinPeters
  2 years ago
  
  Hello Joel, I appreciate your feedback. With every month of Content Personality Club, I update my website. Karen Joy Fritz had also some great ideas. My website was just relaunched. We are still ironing out issues. I should be able to do my own updates by next week. Therefore, I have not added the September update. Please check it out at…Read More
  - JoelElfman
    2 years ago
    
    Happy to help. Page looks good. The quote on the left is biig, bold, and negative. Can you add more so there is a transformation state at the end “…and now, I easily talk to…”
    - KerstinPeters
      2 years ago
      
      Thanks, Joel. It is always a great help to get some fresh eyes to look at your content.

JoelElfman
1 year, 11 months ago

Nichole, this is really good. Most of the comments are about color or fonts.:
1- Gold on white is sometimes hard to read, especially w/ a cursive script. With this particular font, both the opening “N”, and later the opening “I” in a later testimonial almost blend a bit w/ the italics designating it as a testimonial.

2- “Until I discovere…Read More

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