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Hi everyone!
I’d love your feedback and reflections on this draft post.
With gratitude.
AnnIs leadership stress dragging you down?
As a woman in a leadership role, you’re no stranger to navigating stress and pressure.
This is not your first rodeo- you’ve been at this for a while and it’s tak…Read More
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@amyhager… like this reframe. thanks
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This feels like a better theme than stress: learned to speak my truth without the other party feeling attacked or judged.learned to speak my truth without the other party feeling attacked or judged.
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Amy, do you think the testimonial doesn’t really reflect the topic? Or, is “learned to speak my truth…” a more interesting or specific?
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D. all the above. I think this quote doesn’t fit the text as well as if you talked about the judgement and speaking truth.
If you have another quote that mentions stress and burn out, plug that into this text. And then create a new draft focused on Judgement and speaking the truth to go with this quote.-
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@amyhager… thanks a million!
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Here is my post draft. Feedback welcome. Do I create a clear enough picture of the challenge and transformation?
Are you stuck in overwhelm when it comes to getting your financial information organized so you can file your taxes?
Do you struggle with managing the money in your business because you feel like you just aren’t a ‘numbers per…Read More
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Hey, Sara! Great post. You’re really zeroing in on your clients’ problem state. The program I think can be a little more concrete. Right now it kind of reads like it just consists of two calls. Can you spell out a little of what you do and what you help your client to do?
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Thanks Dan and thanks for the feedback on the call today.
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I like it- maybe With Easy Business™ Bookkeeping VIP, includes XXXX and 2 BONUS 1:1 sessions with me, where I guide you through what’s holding you back so you can implement the system seamlessly for your business.
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Thank you…that’s helpful, I’l tweak that.
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How’s this? Enough detail? I am trying to stay away from explaining the entire program in this post.
With Easy Business™ Bookkeeping VIP, you get access to my Easy Business™ Bookkeeping program and 2 BONUS 1:1 sessions with me,…Read More-
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YES!
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A couple of additional thoughts, Sara:
I think the meta-message (the underlying message of everything you say) is EASE. For instance, I see the word ‘templates’ and I think, oh yeah, that’s what’ll make things easy for me. I want to know more about THAT!
$2k is a big spend for me. I want a little more specificity in what’s included. Like a bullet…Read More-
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Thank you for your thoughts! I will add some detail…
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Sara, this feels really clear to me.
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This could speak to any business person out there, so there for it doesn’t speak to anyone. A few suggestions, but see if you can get smaller with who you help on this as well.
Are you stuck in overwhelm when it comes to getting your financial information organized so you can file your taxes? And so instead you help a client with their health…Read More
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This was clear to me. You identified who this is for, what their struggle is, how your program will help and that for this one time cost your clients gain a system they can use for years.
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If you have missed Inspired Beyond Belief – I had Shannon stream my favorite part into the FB Group. You all need to watch it. Please share your Do | Be | Have goals in the comments of that video.
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Looking forward to seeing who will be in Miami with me!
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