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Hi all! I’m gearing up for a Workshop in January on Mindful Eating so next couple of emails are going to be around that. Please have a look below and let me know if the story ties in to the invitation to the workshop!
@circle270mediagmail-com @hellokimromain-com @kathymthoodphotography-com @wdnyc2014gmail-com @annettepresleyhotmail-comSubject:…Read More
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Email #1 Beyond Your Bio @hellokimromain-com @kathymthoodphotography-com @fancyfamilyphotokeeper-com would love your eyes on the email below 🙂
Subject: Lessons from a Tough Night
Preview: What stress taught meHi [FNAME],
[HOOK]
Have you ever had a moment so stressful that all you wanted to do afterward was eat your feelings and forget…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Thank you Kim for the great insights!! Love the suggestions. Let me work on the edits 🤗
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I agree with everything Kim said. More details will help your readers see themselves in your story.
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Hello everyone! I liked the open session yesterday where we got to share feedback. So here’s me tagging all those who said yes to having a pod or supporting each other. @circle270mediagmail-com @hellokimromain-com @kathymthoodphotography-com @wdnyc2014gmail-com
What does support look like for you? Personally, I would love having a time once a…Read More
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I think your outline sounds like what I had in mind. I’m flexible how it works but do think it makes sense to do it right after class when its fresh – It might be enough to do a meet up 2x a month and the rest via email (google docs)
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Sounds good! I’d also be up for one or 2 meet ups a month. And with @kathymthoodphotography-com and @hellokimromain-com would a Friday work at 4pm EAT? If time zones don’t work perhaps we share on specific days our work and provide feedback?
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4pm EAT is 8am EST, which would work great on Friday mornings. I know that @wdnyc2014gmail-com was also interested in being a part of this. I’m wondering what it might look like if the 5 of us just committed to giving it a go? Do we want to post here, tag each other and then we can use that time on Fridays as a space to workshop?
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Yup that would be great! Happy to start an hour later as well if you want. Lets give it a go on Friday next week? I’ll send out a calendar invite with Zoom link
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That’ 5 AM for me….. A little to early.
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And it’s 6AM for me on MST, also too early as that’s when I get up and the first hour is spent feeding and medicating animals.
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Hi Jaini- I would love to be in a peer review pod. For me a review of my draft would be best on Friday or Monday after our first meeting of the month. That gives me Wednesday class and after to draft it. A day to let it sit then review and refine so that it is more polished to look at on the next Wednesday class. I would really like to have at…Read More
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I would be interested in this as well. I couldn’t attend the session live due to having a root canal extracted, and just went through the replay Sunday evening. Kenya is actually 10 hours ahead of my time zone (MST). But having a dedicated time or at least a group to submit drafts to would go along way for me.
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Yes I think knowing who we can tag here would help in having a committed peer group to work with
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Email #4 for my nurture sequence. Do you connect with the story and the points?
Hey, FNAME!
A few months ago, I was on holiday in Istanbul, Turkey and everything that could go wrong WENT wrong.
I got a serious sugar craving and ate a fully processed sugar, gluten and cream loaded baklava – which was kind of unusual considering the number o…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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@amymshannonhernandez-com and @clientsmshannonhernandez-com tagging you as it’s really quiet here in the forum and would love to get momentum on this and get my welcome sequence out. So please share your feedback as we wait for community members
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Hi Jaini. Thank you for your message.
The Club wall is set up for peer to peer review, and we encourage you to tag 2 or 3 of your peers when you post asking for feedback. This will hopefully get their attention and get conversations going.
As you can imagine, Shannon and I do not review every single posted content in this program, as that is…Read More
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I liked this a lot Jaini and think it’s quite clear – both the connecting with audience and your invitation for a discovery call. Sorry it’s so quite here – I admit, I forget to log on. Feel free to reach out directly if you want some feedback – wdnyc2014@gmail.com
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Thanks Whitney!
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I like this, it’s very relatable. I think this sentence needs a little reworking and learnt should be learned. “I learnt so much about my big feelings that I was holding in as soon as I shared them with my husband, it reminded me the power of talking out loud.”
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Thanks Annette! Any suggestions on what needs reworking in the sentence?
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I think I’d add another point to the what you can do section about sharing your big feelings with someone and skip the ‘to wrap up’ sentence and the ‘I learned so much’ sentence.
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Would love your comments on this Email #3 for my nurture sequence. Does this sound inviting and speaking to someone you know?
Hello, I’m dropping in again, FNAME.
I love all things mindful eating, empowering transformation, and creating vibrant, joyful lives. But I also know that finding balance, breaking old habits, and stepping into a h…Read More
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Jaini Shah
Food Relationship Coach, Rapid Transformational Therapist
At 30 Jaini felt like she was 60 and knew something had to change. In January 2020 she embarked on a health journey that turned everything around from having more energy, to having normal thyroid function and being happier on a day to day basis. She left her corporate law career and became a Food Relationship Coach and a Rapid Transformational Therapist to help others also rewrite their health stories. She loves to be camping in the bush if she's not coaching, being outdoors and always being curious about how we can be better than yesterday.
Hey @jaini-shah15gmail-com – As a fellow recovering attorney… I felt this one! A couple of suggestions… this sentence “Something I never used to do in moments like that was pause and reflect.” felt out of place. I think you’re fine going right into ” I didn’t think about how I felt…” Feels more powerful and doesn’t stop the flow of the s…Read More