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Following yesterday’s call here’s a draft of the email I’d like to send out. Let me know if it’s catchy and if you get the point?
Subject line: Don’t Invite the Holiday Weight
Preview: Have fun on holiday!Hook: Say goodbye to the holiday weight – or just don’t invite it in the first place!
Sound too good to be true?Here’s the thing,…Read More
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NURTURE SEQUENCE- EMAIL 1
Would love some feedback here please, is the email too wordy? Am I direct enough as to who I’m talking to and what I believe? Note I am using this as a welcome sequence for those who join my list through my landing page/link in bio form.
Subject: FirstNAME, Nice to meet you!
Preview: [Lets Get Healthy]Hello…Read More
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Thanks Amy. What are bold qualifiers? Here’s a re-work of the Big Mission: “My BIG mission is to help tired individuals change their mindset and food habits so that they can wake up feeling fresh, have the energy to do all the things they love, go on adventures with ease and just feel light, energetic and happy in their body. “
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Hi @jaini-shah15gmail-com Here are some thoughts.
This empowering statement would have kep me reading if it were at the beginning: My BIG mission is to help individuals who are seeking more energy to do the things they love, want to break through any fears or mental blocks that are holding them back to take a stand for their health, master their…Read More
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Thanks Jen! That helps. I was following the format in the Nurture Sequence training that’s why the Big Mission is where it is in the email 🙈 But totally get what you’re saying. Also need to refine the pain points and the ideal outcome.
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QUESTION- Can the May 2024 Lead Magnet Nurture sequence also work for creating my general nurture sequence? So when people sign up to my email list from my link in bio form can I use this Nurture Sequence as a template?
Also is there something I can watch to help with my messaging on my link in bio form/landing page?4 Comments-
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Related to this would you suggest that as I create my new welcome sequence, I add those are already on my list (and may have gone through my old sequence) to the new sequence to run through it? @amymshannonhernandez-com?
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May 2024 nurture sequence is totally the one to use as a guide
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Did you watch landing page copy in the Direct Offer Content? It isn’t going to be exactly what you are asking for (bio is coming up though) but I think it will help.
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Thanks! I’ll add this to my list to watch. In relation to my email list- would you suggest that as I create my new welcome sequence, I add those who are already on my list (and may have gone through my old sequence) to the new sequence to run through it?
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Hi everyone! Sorry for being a bit quiet for the last few weeks, its been a travel month! Watched the October Replay and here is my first draft of a debunking BS email. Is it clear on what the BS? And do you feel I am bringing out my expertise enough?
Subject line: Work out so you can Eat
Preview: That’s a LIE!Hi NAME,
Did you know that…Read More
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The connection of working out so that you can eat whatever you want gets kinda lost as your story is about changing your eating to heal yourself. Do you have a story that focus’s more on exercise versus diet verses whole foods?
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Thanks @kathymthoodphotography-com for the comment! Let me re-look at how the email reads and whether I can tie the first part to the last part. This might mean I get 2 emails coming from this now 🙂
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You opening line is great!!!
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Thanks!
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Hi Guys! So I’m finally getting back to working on my lead conversion tool since the Workshop a few months ago. And this was spurred on because I am watching the May course on the lead magnet nurture sequence. I would love your eyes on this draft document. What do you understand from this checklist, what do you think it’s trying to do? Is it…Read More
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This is an energy assessment, not really a checklist. Calling it a checklist will leave people confused.
I think after the 5 questions, you need to state “keep reading to get your rating” You also need to give instruction that you need to add up your numbers after the last questions.-
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Thanks Amy! I will update this.
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I liked the way you did the myths in between the questions and the results …it kept my interest. Lots of info but I loved it. I am sure many will find this info really interesting.
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Thank you Sam for the feedback!
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Jaini Shah
Food Relationship Coach, Rapid Transformational Therapist
At 30 Jaini felt like she was 60 and knew something had to change. In January 2020 she embarked on a health journey that turned everything around from having more energy, to having normal thyroid function and being happier on a day to day basis. She left her corporate law career and became a Food Relationship Coach and a Rapid Transformational Therapist to help others also rewrite their health stories. She loves to be camping in the bush if she's not coaching, being outdoors and always being curious about how we can be better than yesterday.
individuals in your BIG mission section falls flat. It seems not like you and is cold. Look at your bold qualifiers… what else can you use there?