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After a terrific consult, I came up w/ these 3 Core Value Statements. Many Thanks to today’s pod people, Kerstin Peters, Susan Lazar Hart & Ann James
– CONNECTION – I believe that the more our conscious & unconscious connect (align), the better we are able to access the vast array of resources within us
– FLOW – I believe when mind & body w…Read More
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Beautiful.
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Thank you Daniela! Thank you Ruth!
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Joel – these are really clear and the fact you got it down to 3 is super impressive!
I like the use of the word align in your connect statement.
Suggested change to RESILIENCY for clarity in reading – I believe in our ability to be resourceful and bounce back, regardless of the curve balls life throws us. This invaluable trait can be m…Read More
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Thank you Safrianna, great rewrite. And you just gave me a high-level problem because a friend & I just spent a couple of hours w/ a difficult photo/text editor. Now I am going to have to go in again, and plug in your lovely suggestion. 🙂
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Brand Commitment Statements.
• What is mine to do concerning my clients?
I am committed to helping military veterans conquer the battle over their finances so that they can live THEIR life of freedom they’ve fought for and deserve.2 Comments-
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You might consider shorting it for a better flow: I am committed to helping military veterans conquer the battle over their finances to live THEIR life of freedom they’ve fought for and deserve.
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Here’s a few more options: I am committed to helping military veterans conquer their finances so they can live THEIR life of freedom they’ve fought for and deserve. or I am committed to helping military veterans take command and control over their finances so they can live THEIR life of freedom they’ve fought for and deserve.
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Hello lovely Club members! Want to get a little more support on your messaging –in a super fun conversational way? Season 2 of our podcast is out – and this week we invite you to take a deeper look with us at the conscious and subconscious impact your words are having on others. Tune it at the link to join me + Amy in a fun convo!
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After a few trials and already getting feedback (THANK YOU) still feels off… I think i just feel off LOL
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If you have been here awhile – THANK YOU!
Where has 2022 gone? Too fast for me. So far this year we have been learning from Retreat Leaders Live interviews. Been Dreaming in the Daylight -…Read More
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Hi @amyttravs-com – I like this version much better! Good job. Let’s get it sent out and see what happens. Will you also tweak this for a FB/LI post?
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Oh yes – The FB/LI is much easier cuz I know who is engaged there 😉 And will post it to all my groups that always ask to post offers and I am a paid member of, etc….
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Really Good, I would recommend a few changes.
(((I think this is a minor flip but a little clearer))) “So far this year we have been learning from Retreat Leaders Live interviews. Been bringing your retreat plan into reality during our Dreaming in the Daylight, and I have been working with dozens of transformational leaders to build their r…Read More
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Again – I so appreciate your insight!!!!
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Would love any and all feedback on my direct offer post that would go into an email:
Hi ***,
Did you know that data driven businesses are 23 times more likely to acquire new customers and 19 times more likely to be profitable? Those are some staggering statistics folks, whether you love numbers or hate them. The evidence is clear that looking at…Read More
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I think it sounds great!
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Thanks Annette! I appreciate you taking the time to read it through.
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Yes this is so good!!
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Thanks Sue! Appreciate it.
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Hi Donna, this is reading tight and strong; good work, Any ideas for a grabby TITLE?
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Thanks Nancy. For a title I was thinking “It’s time for profitable decision making in your business”
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Donna, I think that the arguments that you make so strongly to follow are too compelling, and almost demand, a hookier title. Let yourself get passionate about your topic, which you clearly are, and see what comes out :-D! ?How to make your numbers your best friend vs. your worst enemy? Stop sweeping the financial truth of your business under the…Read More-
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Nancy, thanks for your kind words.. love your suggestions.. I will have some fun with it and see what I can come up with. Titles are obviously not my strong point! On a side note, I would be happy to chat with you further if you wish, no need to wait till you hit $200K!
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Very clear and compelling, Donna. I have a similar problem with titles.
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Donna, really good.
I would consider flipping “Are you ready to dump uncertain guesswork and start making profitable decisions in your business?, to “Are you ready to start making profitable decisions in your business, and dump uncertain guesswork?
And I would also consider, again switching the CTA around, “Book a call with me and let’s make…Read More-
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Thanks Joel for your thoughts! I like your suggestions.
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I love these! So clear! wow..