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JoelElfman

• 2 years, 3 months ago

Does anyone have the chat from yesterday saved? I had created a Word doc w/ notes from the session, but for some damn reason it did not save. I’m going to listen again, and recreate. The chat would be helpful if someone has it. Thanx in advance. Joel

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- Shannon
  2 years, 3 months ago
  
  Hey Joel! Reach out to @amymshannonhernandez-com via email and she can get it to you. She did save it before we closed the meeting. Woohoo!
  - JoelElfman
    2 years, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks Shannon!
DanielaBorgialli

• 2 years, 3 months ago

Hi everyone – I wanted to drop some content ideas for a landing page for a 10 week course – Moving Motivated Women…
Any ideas or direction are welcome – thank you!

#1 what do you want them to buy into?
I want them to buy into a 10 week course – a holistic movement based 10 week course

2. Ask what is my audience frustrated…Read More

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- AmyHager
  2 years, 3 months ago
  
  Great first draft! On the questions, the way to level up your messaging is to get away from the focus of “pain” and look at the future. So, for your questions, I have reworded them.
  “wouldn’t it be nice to feel secure, supported, pain free and confident in my body! “ – How does YOUR body feel when you are supported, pain free? Can you imagi…Read More
  - DanielaBorgialli
    2 years, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks @amymshannonhernandez-com – a little confused – for clarity are you suggesting change how I stated the “wouldn’t it be nice…” sentences to statements revolving around being supported pain free and confident??
    Thank you again….
    - AmyHager
      2 years, 3 months ago
      
      correct
- JoelElfman
  2 years, 3 months ago
  
  Lots of great material here. The “Moving” in the title is a bit ambiguous. “Moving” could be related to business, attitude, and personal life. Not sure about the alternative titles just yet. You could do something like “Motivated Women Moving Muscles” which would be more simple & direct. Might not fit if you have a bigger umbrella.
  - DanielaBorgialli
    2 years, 3 months ago
    
    thanks @joel. It’s really about moving more than muscle – once you start aligning the body other parts start to shift too… this is mind body soul work… 🙂
    - JoelElfman
      2 years, 3 months ago
      
      Got it. And still “Moving” by itself feels too ambiguous. I’d love to see feedback on this from others. i know it’s way overdone, but to me, “Motivated Women Moving Mind & Body” feels better than leaving it so ambiguous. The other consideration that comes to mind, is that I imagine a Motivated Woman or person wanting clarity or some sense of the…Read More
      
      DanielaBorgialli
      2 years, 3 months ago
      
      @joel – I appreciate this – it’s all in the cooker!!! 🙂
Emily Gowen, Accredited Financial Coach

• 2 years, 3 months ago

FEEDBACK WELCOME! I finally caught up on this week’s training and drafted my landing page for financial coaching for couples- I would love any and all thoughts you have about how I could make it better! ESPECIALLY the name of the program… could be more exciting/describe results. pdxmoneycoaching.com/3month-program-self-employed-couples

If it’s…Read More

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- JulianneMiller, AFC®
  2 years, 3 months ago
  
  Oh wow! I just landed on calm and confident for a three-week short program! Maybe we talked about it and it stayed with me?! I’m still tossing it around. But I don’t usually work with couples so different target lol
- Shannon
  2 years, 3 months ago
  
  Hey Emily! So this is a really good start. And a landing page is much different than a sales page for a program – so I’d say you have about 2/3 of the stuff here needed. Do you have a transformation statement for this offer? We’d want to center the entire program around it! Also, I know you are thinking about the VIP Vacation – I think it would…Read More
  - Emily Gowen, Accredited Financial Coach
    2 years, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks Shannon! Since I stated my niche, I really listened in and decided to change it to just service-based business owners who weren’t taught how to be ‘good with money.’ I’m happy to help them and their partners, but when I started making my marketing plan for a niche focused on couples work, I just wasn’t as excited about it!
    
    I don’t even…Read More
- JoelElfman
  2 years, 3 months ago
  
  Hi Emily, This is really good. 2 quick notes. How long is a session? I don’t think it said, but I could have missed it. The other thing was “-Confidently manage your money together so you can enjoy spending now, save more than ever before, fix your cash flow and feel financial peace of mind.” I don’t think the top item if I’m struggling would be…Read More
DanielaBorgialli

• 2 years, 3 months ago

FaceBook Event:
https://fb.me/e/3IqPmdbGa

thank you!

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NicholeMyles

• 2 years, 3 months ago

Here’s the link to my coaching page: https://www.mylestogo.net/coaching
Thanks for all the help and feedback today – much appreciated!

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- JoelElfman
  2 years, 3 months ago
  
  Nichole, this is really good. Most of the comments are about color or fonts.:
  1- Gold on white is sometimes hard to read, especially w/ a cursive script. With this particular font, both the opening “N”, and later the opening “I” in a later testimonial almost blend a bit w/ the italics designating it as a testimonial.
  
  2- “Until I discovere…Read More
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