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FEEDBACK WELCOME! I finally caught up on this week’s training and drafted my landing page for financial coaching for couples- I would love any and all thoughts you have about how I could make it better! ESPECIALLY the name of the program… could be more exciting/describe results. pdxmoneycoaching.com/3month-program-self-employed-couples
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Hey Emily! So this is a really good start. And a landing page is much different than a sales page for a program – so I’d say you have about 2/3 of the stuff here needed. Do you have a transformation statement for this offer? We’d want to center the entire program around it! Also, I know you are thinking about the VIP Vacation – I think it would…Read More
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Thanks Shannon! Since I stated my niche, I really listened in and decided to change it to just service-based business owners who weren’t taught how to be ‘good with money.’ I’m happy to help them and their partners, but when I started making my marketing plan for a niche focused on couples work, I just wasn’t as excited about it!
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Hi Emily, This is really good. 2 quick notes. How long is a session? I don’t think it said, but I could have missed it. The other thing was “-Confidently manage your money together so you can enjoy spending now, save more than ever before, fix your cash flow and feel financial peace of mind.” I don’t think the top item if I’m struggling would be…Read More
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Here’s the link to my coaching page: https://www.mylestogo.net/coaching
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Nichole, this is really good. Most of the comments are about color or fonts.:
1- Gold on white is sometimes hard to read, especially w/ a cursive script. With this particular font, both the opening “N”, and later the opening “I” in a later testimonial almost blend a bit w/ the italics designating it as a testimonial.2- “Until I discovere…Read More
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As requested, the URL for my sales page is: http://www.sarafins.com/bookkeeping
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BodyHypnosis Signature Program
Are You Operating from Your Best Self?
Create Clarity, Connection & Transformation
– Reduce Stress, Anxiety
– Create More Happiness, Confidence & Ease
– Build New Habits, Beliefs & Ways of Thinking (i.e. Weight Loss, Stop Smoking, Imposter Syndrome and more)
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Hello Joel, I like that you described most of your benefits in a positive way, maybe you could also rewrite the first benefit: Establish More Balance and Calmness (or something similar)? I would move the words around in your CTA: Schedule a Clarity Call, and learn how the 12-week BodyHypnosis Program can improve your life.
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Thanks Kerstin, I’ve changed the CTA and looking at the other changes you suggested. Just sent it off to my web people. I’ll make more changes soon.
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Oh wow! I just landed on calm and confident for a three-week short program! Maybe we talked about it and it stayed with me?! I’m still tossing it around. But I don’t usually work with couples so different target lol