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  • This months value messaging. I posted on FB and IG.

    🤍 “I had my first ever Oh My Goddess appointment yesterday and I cannot recommend this treatment enough! You need this! It was so relaxing and the Reiki along with the hair/scalp treatment made this a beautiful experience that I will do again and again. Thank you for offering this service,…Read More

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    • Hi Aimee! I’m quite new to the club, but I understood that this month’s content type was more about giving them 3 tips about what you do that adds value. I do love the testimonial at the beginning, but isn’t that another type of post? And in the 5 points, that sounds more like you are telling them what Reiki is, and why they need it (I am a Reiki…Read More

      • Great feedback @marielasoulbusinessdesign-com ❤️
        Aimee, this is a great post – but it doesn’t follow this month’s format. You can switch out the 5 things and create 3 tips for people who are new to a Reiki experience or 3 tips for someone who wants to bring more Reiki into their daily life. Good blend of testimonial and a benefit post here.

      • Hi! I am grateful for your feedback. My intension for the tesimony was for it to be my “hook”. However you are right, the tips I gave were out of context for what this months theme is.

  • Second Post- Revised Offer! Feedback please 🙂

    Want to turn WORRY into PEACE OF MIND?
    If you are concerned about your adolescent’s mental wellness and feeling overwhelmed with how to handle it, this message is FOR YOU.

    Do any of these “I” statements resonate with you?

    – I worry about my child experiencing anxiety, depression
    – I strug…Read More

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    • Run with this as is… you did a good job. I really want to work on this HOOK: Want to turn WORRY into PEACE OF MIND?

      It is very vague. Any ideas of how to make it more powerful for a parent would stop their school and feel like you are talking directly to them in the very first sentence?

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