-
I had mentioned in one of the sessions that I was featured in a new LEVANTA online magazine. I am excited to share the link with you: https://issuu.com/design.your.plate.
![Profile Photo]()
![Profile Photo]()
liked this
1 Comment -
1st draft
BodyHypnosis Signature Program
Are You Operating from Your Best Self?
Create Clarity, Connection & Transformation
– Reduce Stress, Anxiety
– Create More Happiness, Confidence & Ease
– Build New Habits, Beliefs & Ways of Thinking (i.e. Weight Loss, Stop Smoking, Imposter Syndrome and more)
– Make Changes that are Positive, Healthy…Read More2 Comments-
![Profile picture of KerstinPeters]()
Hello Joel, I like that you described most of your benefits in a positive way, maybe you could also rewrite the first benefit: Establish More Balance and Calmness (or something similar)? I would move the words around in your CTA: Schedule a Clarity Call, and learn how the 12-week BodyHypnosis Program can improve your life.
-
![Profile picture of JoelElfman]()
Thanks Kerstin, I’ve changed the CTA and looking at the other changes you suggested. Just sent it off to my web people. I’ll make more changes soon.
-
-
-
Here is my first draft for the landing page for my three-month beginners course, Learn German Through Art:
Wouldn’t it be great if you could communicate in everyday German?
Learn German Through Art – A German Course Focusing on Everyday Conversations to get you talking with German speakers quickly and confidently
In this interactive c…Read More
![Profile Photo]()
![Profile Photo]()
![Profile Photo]()
liked this
7 Comments-
![Profile picture of DonnaDube]()
I like this overall Kerstin, short and to the point. I wonder if you could include something that confirms I do not need to be an “artist” to enjoy this course, and also something to encourage me if I know absolutely “no German” now. Just to clarify who this program is for in a bit more detail.
-
![Profile picture of AmyHager]()
Great questions, Donna!
-
![Profile picture of KerstinPeters]()
Hello Donna, thanks for the suggestion. While I mention it when I talk about my courses, I should add: Are you worried about your artistic skills? If you can draw stick men, you can participate. I don’t teach you how to draw but how to use visual images that help you to remember new vocabulary.
-
-
![Profile picture of JoelElfman]()
I like this a lot. It does feel a little cut & dry. May get a little granular. How does the class have fun. Is there a particular fun exercise that you do, would it be okay to mention something about it. I’m wondering if any of your students have some funny stories about a situation where their conversational skill came in handy. Getting…Read More
-
![Profile picture of KerstinPeters]()
Hello Joel, I appreciate your feedback. With every month of Content Personality Club, I update my website. Karen Joy Fritz had also some great ideas. My website was just relaunched. We are still ironing out issues. I should be able to do my own updates by next week. Therefore, I have not added the September update. Please check it out at…Read More
-
![Profile picture of JoelElfman]()
Happy to help. Page looks good. The quote on the left is biig, bold, and negative. Can you add more so there is a transformation state at the end “…and now, I easily talk to…”
-
![Profile picture of KerstinPeters]()
Thanks, Joel. It is always a great help to get some fresh eyes to look at your content.
-
-
-
-
-
Here’s my copy for the TinyBiz Blueprint pilot course:
(Draft up at
)Serious About Simplifying?
Architect Your 1 Page Blueprint for Your Simplest Possible Business
support your lifestyle while you do your good in the world[Count Me In] button jumps down to buy button
Whether your decision to simplify…Read More
![Profile Photo]()
liked this
3 Comments-
![Profile picture of Annette Presley]()
I feel like this might be too long and could be more concise. I don’t think you need to use the word pilot because it makes it sound like you are creating a blueprint for a pilot program not necessarily a business.
I am not fond of the word architect. It’s not relatable and architecting something doesn’t sound simple or easy. I think design,…Read More
-
![Profile picture of KerstinPeters]()
I agree with Annette. I would replace the word architect with create or design because you want your plan to be flexible and unique and not strict and without any tolerances. I would use the word pilot in a subtitle.
Design Your Custom TinyBiz Blueprint – a four-week pilot program to downshift your business to have more time, attention, and…Read More -
![Profile picture of AmyHager]()
Great advice from Annette and Kerstin. You do not need to say it is pilot program. It is a four-week program.
-
-
Hey there! Slight delay in the replay. Please go here to view it from Wed’s meeting: https://us02web.zoom.us/rec/share/crFMhOydLdoe5adiLdrlDlDXL63uRj9xGrP8DMJYFWDdW0TXSqU3JyBI3CRhHI1x.kK1nz_SgV67UMMs4
![Profile Photo]()
![Profile Photo]()
liked this
- Load More Posts
whooo hoo!!