Hi Joel, will you have a visual that goes with the text?

Hi Joel! Wonder if using simpler, conversational words would make your piece even more powerful? Win over vs trumps; power through, knee jerk reactions vs anticipatory. Simplify and tighten it up perhaps? Also, perhaps refining your viewpoint; often willpower can only get you so far; then what? Seriously, consider HYPNOSIS — and why? FACT:…Read More

Joel – who are your Zoom Mates this month in your pod? You’ll want to tag them so they can review this and give feedback!

Hello Joel, I am one of your Zoom Mates. For the title, I would prefer Is Willpower the Best Motivator/Motivation for Change? I can relate to the fact that you present and find them compelling to try hypnosis. Fact 1: I would use nouns for all reasons. Fact 2, I would add the horse as an example to visualize what you mean. Let’s imagine a horse…Read More

Maybe make the Myth an erroneous statement to make it more catchy. Like “You have to go through the misery of white-knuckling-it to change your life.”

Hi Amy! We are working on tagging and trying to get it set up so we can tag the name. Right now it is tagged by email address – which is not so helpful.

Who is in your Zoom Mate pod this month?

This is awesome! Be sure to post as a written post AND then do a video on the same content. Let’s see which performs better.

Hi Amy C, this is really strong. My favorite fact, followed by your CTA are genius. Of the Facts, the 90% for me was the strongest. I would consider moving that into 1st FACT position. And move the thoughts to the bottom or somewhere below. I have a minor disconnect with the title, I feel like either. the “all” should come out or “blues” becomes…Read More