• Hi everyone
    Unfortunately missed the call live but had a go at doing the commitment e mail. Would love any feedback- thanks in advance

    Subject: I am committed…

    Hi …..

    I am committed to a holistic and positive approach to skincare and self care. As midlife women entering a new chapter in life, I believe its our time to shine. This is…Read More

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    • Hi @sambrabendergmail-com I was following your email pretty well until I got to your CTA. I’m confused why you would send them to your website but then ask them not to order but to reply to your email. This might be too many actions or confuse your readers about what you actually want them to do-visit your website or reply to your email.

    • I wonder if the section as a customer of mine could answer the questions you posed above. Like you go to bed feeling your skin is being nourished is the question.Then in the customer section-you can rest easy knowing that the hard work of rounding up the best ingredients for your night cream has been done. I love the grateful comments but they…Read More

      • Kathy, good job pulling it back together and keeping things connected. Sam, I think this is a great suggestion

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  • Hi everyone,

    Would love any feedback on my post using past experience for thought reversal. Any great ideas for a better title would be greatly appreciated.

    Time to challenge assumptions?

    As an ex corporate marketer, I am first to admit that I was a snob when it came buying products from a direct sales company. How could they possibly…Read More

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    • I like this a lot! I think your hook could be: Is there a time you had to challenge your own assumptions? And then you go into the story as it is written. I do not see your CTA or transition at the end. what do you want them to do after reading this?

      • love your suggestion! CTA: Lets stay connected with my monthly newsletter.Click here to be kept up to date with new product developments and special promotions

    • I like that you shared the science behind the product, but I am missing the transition and what you want me to do next.

  • Is there a way of accessing the handout/template you referred to today in the call?

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