Hi @sambrabendergmail-com I was following your email pretty well until I got to your CTA. I’m confused why you would send them to your website but then ask them not to order but to reply to your email. This might be too many actions or confuse your readers about what you actually want them to do-visit your website or reply to your email.

I wonder if the section as a customer of mine could answer the questions you posed above. Like you go to bed feeling your skin is being nourished is the question.Then in the customer section-you can rest easy knowing that the hard work of rounding up the best ingredients for your night cream has been done. I love the grateful comments but they…Read More

I like this a lot! I think your hook could be: Is there a time you had to challenge your own assumptions? And then you go into the story as it is written. I do not see your CTA or transition at the end. what do you want them to do after reading this?

I like that you shared the science behind the product, but I am missing the transition and what you want me to do next.

Go to the session the next day and you will see the replay with the notes: https://contentpersonalityclub.com/courses/march-2024/

Our goal is always to have it up on Thursday. If there might be a delay, we will let you know. But I just checked and everything is there waiting for you. ❤️