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HI Everyone,
I decided to try something different w/ my 9 word email.
I thought I would use this format to test a possible opt-in gift and hopefully gain some feedback. The video/audio is really rough cut, but I think that’s okay. Feel free to give feedback.
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Re: Thank You FName
Preview Text: A Gift & a RequestHi F…Read More
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delete: Re-record it? Make changes?
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Thank you for all the suggestions Amy. I will implement.
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Does anyone have the chat from yesterday saved? I had created a Word doc w/ notes from the session, but for some damn reason it did not save. I’m going to listen again, and recreate. The chat would be helpful if someone has it. Thanx in advance. Joel
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Hey Joel! Reach out to @amymshannonhernandez-com via email and she can get it to you. She did save it before we closed the meeting. Woohoo!
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Thanks Shannon!
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Here is the link to my newsletter: https://mailchi.mp/43de4a4f2a2a/german-news-5252496?e=87357eb8af
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I had mentioned in one of the sessions that I was featured in a new LEVANTA online magazine. I am excited to share the link with you: https://issuu.com/design.your.plate.
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whooo hoo!!
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1st draft
BodyHypnosis Signature Program
Are You Operating from Your Best Self?
Create Clarity, Connection & Transformation
– Reduce Stress, Anxiety
– Create More Happiness, Confidence & Ease
– Build New Habits, Beliefs & Ways of Thinking (i.e. Weight Loss, Stop Smoking, Imposter Syndrome and more)
– Make Changes that are Positive, Healthy…Read More2 Comments-
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Hello Joel, I like that you described most of your benefits in a positive way, maybe you could also rewrite the first benefit: Establish More Balance and Calmness (or something similar)? I would move the words around in your CTA: Schedule a Clarity Call, and learn how the 12-week BodyHypnosis Program can improve your life.
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Thanks Kerstin, I’ve changed the CTA and looking at the other changes you suggested. Just sent it off to my web people. I’ll make more changes soon.
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