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Happy New Year everyone! Sorry didn’t get to join the create session for the whole time. Having watched the replay I have managed to draft one email. Would love your thoughts on it. I’ve set out my mission statement first as context if it helps. @hellokimromain-com @wdnyc2014gmail-com @kathymthoodphotography-com @fancyfamilyphotokeeper-com @annette…Read More
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Hi all! I’m gearing up for a Workshop in January on Mindful Eating so next couple of emails are going to be around that. Please have a look below and let me know if the story ties in to the invitation to the workshop!
@circle270mediagmail-com @hellokimromain-com @kathymthoodphotography-com @wdnyc2014gmail-com @annettepresleyhotmail-comSubject:…Read More
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I’m using this email as part of my launch sequence for my new program this month. @jaini-shah15gmail-com @kathymthoodphotography-com @fancyfamilyphotokeeper-com @wdnyc2014gmail-com – I’d love to get your feedback on this.
SUBJECT: WTF is “integrated woo”?!
Hi [Fname]!
I couldn’t wait to get home. The second I walked through the door, t…Read More
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I think you did a good job here and it flows well. I am not sure of the word bespoke as it’s not a common word, but maybe it is in your area of expertise. I would just make sure it’s a word your audience would relate to.
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Nice one Kim!! A great read and a nice flow.
For me I feel like maybe there’s a bit of repetition here: in “By day, I was an attorney (and later a nonprofit executive). The suit, the heels, and the polished words …” and the third paragraph “At work, I was the polished professional, constantly proving myself …” Maybe consider putting them…Read More
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Thanks @fancyfamilyphotokeeper-com @annettepresleyhotmail-com and @jaini-shah15gmail-com – I’ve taken all of those notes into consideration and have updated my copy. It will be going out on Tuesday as part of the launch for my new program. I appreciate your help!
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I like that you put the ‘woo” into it 🙂 other comments I would make have already been said above. This is a fantastic email.
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Thanks, @kathymthoodphotography-com! I appreciate you.
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4pm EAT is 8am EST, which would work great on Friday mornings. I know that @wdnyc2014gmail-com was also interested in being a part of this. I’m wondering what it might look like if the 5 of us just committed to giving it a go? Do we want to post here, tag each other and then we can use that time on Fridays as a space to workshop?
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Yup that would be great! Happy to start an hour later as well if you want. Lets give it a go on Friday next week? I’ll send out a calendar invite with Zoom link
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Hello everyone! I liked the open session yesterday where we got to share feedback. So here’s me tagging all those who said yes to having a pod or supporting each other. @circle270mediagmail-com @hellokimromain-com @kathymthoodphotography-com @wdnyc2014gmail-com
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I think your outline sounds like what I had in mind. I’m flexible how it works but do think it makes sense to do it right after class when its fresh – It might be enough to do a meet up 2x a month and the rest via email (google docs)
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Sounds good! I’d also be up for one or 2 meet ups a month. And with @kathymthoodphotography-com and @hellokimromain-com would a Friday work at 4pm EAT? If time zones don’t work perhaps we share on specific days our work and provide feedback?
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4pm EAT is 8am EST, which would work great on Friday mornings. I know that @wdnyc2014gmail-com was also interested in being a part of this. I’m wondering what it might look like if the 5 of us just committed to giving it a go? Do we want to post here, tag each other and then we can use that time on Fridays as a space to workshop?
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Yup that would be great! Happy to start an hour later as well if you want. Lets give it a go on Friday next week? I’ll send out a calendar invite with Zoom link
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That’ 5 AM for me….. A little to early.
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And it’s 6AM for me on MST, also too early as that’s when I get up and the first hour is spent feeding and medicating animals.
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Hi Jaini- I would love to be in a peer review pod. For me a review of my draft would be best on Friday or Monday after our first meeting of the month. That gives me Wednesday class and after to draft it. A day to let it sit then review and refine so that it is more polished to look at on the next Wednesday class. I would really like to have at…Read More
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I would be interested in this as well. I couldn’t attend the session live due to having a root canal extracted, and just went through the replay Sunday evening. Kenya is actually 10 hours ahead of my time zone (MST). But having a dedicated time or at least a group to submit drafts to would go along way for me.
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Yes I think knowing who we can tag here would help in having a committed peer group to work with
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At my core, I am a creative problem solver, master connector and expansive thinker who works at the intersection of business development, strategy and scale. I love supporting founders with larger visions, accountability and championing dreams. I'm developing a program I currently call Dream Leader aimed at teasing out those quelled dreams and bringing them to life.
I think you did a good job of fleshing this out just a bit to make the thread from your story to theirs be easy to follow. My only suggestion is that you use the word polished twice close together, and I suggest finding a synonym for one of them.