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JoelElfman

• 1 year, 10 months ago

Many thanks again to Kerstin & Susan for their help.
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Here is a key reason why you are feeling stressed & overwhelmed, despite all your successes.

Your brain is conditioned by your past.

When it notices something that resembles a past danger, your brain hits the alarm bell. It fills you with feelings of worry,…Read More

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- AmyHager
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  You ditched the “how” in your story! Good work!!
- Susanlazar hart
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  Well done Joel, great working with nyou too.
DanielaBorgialli

• 1 year, 10 months ago

Again was hoping to have Outcome / Results messaging for my women’s group BUT I decided to practice with Tango and wrote this. Any feedback ? and not sure where I will use it yet…(and is it “bad” etiquette to “accuse” other teachers?? is there a more polite way to say what i’m saying? )

Here is the key reason you’re still not getting the dances…Read More

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- AmyHager
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  You are not saying ANY about those other dance instructors. You kept it focused on the emotion and how the client was feeling
- JoelElfman
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  You may be talking to a specific audience so these questions might not be relevant.
  What does social dance-ability/navigating a social dance floor mean?
  What would be an example of a bad habit? I’m just asking for clarity.
  By dance reputation do you mean social dance reputation?
  - DanielaBorgialli
    1 year, 10 months ago
    
    thanks @joel for your questions.
    so many teachers teach ‘tango’ as choreographed patterns and steps which is not useful for the social dance floor – so they /students don’t actually learn to dance – to lead or to follow.
    a bad habit in tango? there are so many – there are bad lead habits bad follow habits and then bad social dance floor etiquette…Read More
    - JoelElfman
      1 year, 10 months ago
      
      Thanks @Daniela. Great answers, they make things a lot clearer for me. Here is another version based on your responses. I hope this helps.:
      
      Here is the key reason you’re still not getting the dances you want at social events – it’s not your focus, and it’s not your inability to learn something new…. it’s because your attention has been on mak…Read More
      
      DanielaBorgialli
      1 year, 10 months ago
      
      Thanks @Joel for this super word sleuthing/word smithing – rewrite… I will massage it some more and then decide where to use it!!! 🙂
      
      JoelElfman
      1 year, 10 months ago
      
      You are welcome. Your explanations were super helpful. I look forward to seeing the next iteration.
Susanlazar hart

• 1 year, 10 months ago

are we meetingtoday?

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JoelElfman

• 1 year, 10 months ago

Did anyone save the transcript or chat? I got so caught up in the conversation, thinking about my message, and listening to others, I completely forgot to save anything. My bad!

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- KerstinPeters
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  I do. I will email it to you.
KerstinPeters is with JoelElfman and TinaJones

• 1 year, 10 months ago

Who is available and interested in meeting this Friday, November 11, either at 10:30 AM or 11 AM ET to get support with their draft for this month’s message? I will set up a Zoom meeting.

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- JoelElfman
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  I’m in.
  - KerstinPeters
    1 year, 10 months ago
    
    Great. I will post the link tomorrow.
- Susanlazar hart
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  Im in
- KerstinPeters
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  Kerstin Peters is inviting you to a scheduled Zoom meeting. Please join us. We will work on the November message.
  
  Topic: My Meeting with Fellow Content Personality Members
  Time: Nov 11, 2022 11:00 Eastern Time (US and Canada)
  
  Join Zoom Meeting
  https://us06web.zoom.us/j/87071997774?pwd=Uk51WXF5bFBDL1YrVGttNTVHMXhZZz09
  
  Meeting ID: 870 7199…Read More
  - JoelElfman
    1 year, 10 months ago
    
    Great review today. Got phenomenal feedback from @KerstinPeters & @SusanLazarHart
    - KerstinPeters
      1 year, 10 months ago
      
      I agree. Thank you, @JoelElfman and @SusanLazarHart. If you want to join the group for future sessions, please let me know. If there is interest, we can meet once or twice a month to help each other with the messaging of the monthly content.
Susanlazar hart

• 1 year, 10 months ago

Does anyone know where the example SHannon used in her facebook that she taught from last week?
I’ve gotten this far, I have challenged myself to get this on my facebook today- I want to honor my commitment to myself and my business

I would love to see her example

here are the directions from my notes
Craft your opening line that…Read More

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- JoelElfman
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  I think the next segment is the client story? or is that just before… this segment is for you
- AmyHager
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  Go to the session notes (first session of each month) and it is at the bottom of the page.
BethShenton

• 1 year, 10 months ago

Hi all! I’m having an issue accessing the calendar today. Anyone else? Here’s the error – I’ve tried on cellular and WiFi.

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- AmyHager
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  Thanks, Beth. Let me get IT to look into it. I wonder if it is a phone issue. Try your computer. But, for no, here is the zoom link (it is the same zoom link every week): https://us02web.zoom.us/j/83461500974?pwd=Vlcwbk5iWFg1WVJxODJ4RThZWUZoZz09
  Meeting ID: 834 6150 0974
  Passcode: joyful
Brenda Uekert

• 1 year, 10 months ago

Feedback welcome. This one is for my Gutsy Women Finances community.

Here’s a major reason why you continue to struggle with money, even though you have a decent income.

You weren’t taught a thing about how to manage your money growing up. Now you don’t know where to start and you haven’t found anyone you can really trust to guide you o…Read More

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- Annette Presley
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  I like it. But, there is a disconnect for me between the quiz and the community. You say this is for your Gutsy community but then you start the story with the quiz and the CTA is about taking the quiz, not joining a community. There isn’t any context for the community when you talk about it in the story. I would say this piece is about getting…Read More
  - Brenda Uekert
    1 year, 10 months ago
    
    Thanks Annette. Perhaps the key is to work on two separate pieces – quiz and community. I’ll see what I can work up.
- Shannon
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  Brenda – great job diving in and taking action. Woohoo!
- JoelElfman
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  Hi Brenda,
  I love the opening.
  And I think you have a wonderful story about Madison & the club.
  Did Madison take the quiz before or after she joined Gutsy Women Club? Your mention of some of the things you did w/ her made me curious. Are the exercises and your instructions part of the Club something different? What do I get from the club if I…Read More
  - Brenda Uekert
    1 year, 10 months ago
    
    Thanks, Joel. I’m going to separate the quiz from the GWF community. That should make things a whole lot clearer.
Annette Presley

• 1 year, 10 months ago

would love some feedback. Is it compelling?

Here is a key reason your hormones are behaving badly, even though you are eating a healthy diet and taking DIM.

Your minerals are out of whack. You have too much iron and not enough copper.
What do I mean by that?

None of us wants to bust our butt at the gym, eat kale, and take a boatload of…Read More

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- Brenda Uekert
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  taking DIM? It’s a powerful story. Not sure you need this at the end – (which are BIG issues costing you time, money, joy, and your sanity). You’ve unearthed those pieces in your story.
  - Annette Presley
    1 year, 10 months ago
    
    Thanks! I’ll take that out. DIM is a common supplement, but I might need to think of something else to put there.
- JoelElfman
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  instead of taking DIM, you can just mention supplements in general. Plus, DIM & DM are somewhat similar, someone skimming might not pay enough attention.
Brenda Uekert

• 1 year, 10 months ago

I’d love some feedback on this:

Here’s a major reason why you keep starting the new year under a cloud of money worries.

You’re getting sucked into the holiday shopping frenzy and you’re not planning ahead.

Let me explain. None of us wants to start the new year feeling like it will take forever just to “catch up” from our holiday…Read More

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- Annette Presley
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  I like this a lot. I just have a few suggestions for tightening it a bit.
  
  This isn’t a big deal but I don’t think the question mark works. “Yet each November, you get geared up for Black Friday and all the super discounts. Maybe you’re even hunting down deals before you carve into the Thanksgiving turkey and before you know it, you’ve got p…Read More
  - Brenda Uekert
    1 year, 10 months ago
    
    Wow, Annette! Thanks so much. I made the changes.
    - Annette Presley
      1 year, 10 months ago
      
      You’re welcome!
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