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JoelElfman

• 2 years ago

HI Everyone,

I decided to try something different w/ my 9 word email.

I thought I would use this format to test a possible opt-in gift and hopefully gain some feedback. The video/audio is really rough cut, but I think that’s okay. Feel free to give feedback.
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Re: Thank You FName
Preview Text: A Gift & a Request

Hi F…Read More

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- AmyHager
  2 years ago
  
  delete:It’s a rough cut without music
- AmyHager
  2 years ago
  
  delete: Re-record it? Make changes?
  - JoelElfman
    2 years ago
    
    Thank you for all the suggestions Amy. I will implement.
Shannon

• 2 years ago

Happy Sunday Club peeps! Want to get a little more support on your messaging –in a super fun conversational way?

This week we are highlighting Ep 4 of our Season 2 podcast: We invite you to take a deeper look with us at how to create Thought Reversal Content. The purpose of a thought reversal is to change the beliefs of your prospective c…Read More

S2E4: Messaging Ecosystem Content Type 2: Thought Reversals

S2E4: Messaging Ecosystem Content Type 2: Thought Reversals

https://joyfulbusinessrevolution.com/podcast-204/

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- Brenda Uekert
  2 years ago
  
  This is really good. The thing I see in my field that drives me nuts is the idea that we can manifest money, through thoughts, prayers, chants, etc. What happens is the same thing when we think it’s a money mindset problem – the blame gets shifted to the person. Not making money? It’s because you’re not open and welcoming to it. What if it’s…Read More
JoelElfman

• 2 years ago

Does anyone have the chat from yesterday saved? I had created a Word doc w/ notes from the session, but for some damn reason it did not save. I’m going to listen again, and recreate. The chat would be helpful if someone has it. Thanx in advance. Joel

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- Shannon
  2 years ago
  
  Hey Joel! Reach out to @amymshannonhernandez-com via email and she can get it to you. She did save it before we closed the meeting. Woohoo!
  - JoelElfman
    2 years ago
    
    Thanks Shannon!
DanielaBorgialli

• 2 years, 1 month ago

Hi everyone – I wanted to drop some content ideas for a landing page for a 10 week course – Moving Motivated Women…
Any ideas or direction are welcome – thank you!

#1 what do you want them to buy into?
I want them to buy into a 10 week course – a holistic movement based 10 week course

2. Ask what is my audience frustrated…Read More

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- AmyHager
  2 years ago
  
  Great first draft! On the questions, the way to level up your messaging is to get away from the focus of “pain” and look at the future. So, for your questions, I have reworded them.
  “wouldn’t it be nice to feel secure, supported, pain free and confident in my body! “ – How does YOUR body feel when you are supported, pain free? Can you imagi…Read More
  - DanielaBorgialli
    2 years ago
    
    Thanks @amymshannonhernandez-com – a little confused – for clarity are you suggesting change how I stated the “wouldn’t it be nice…” sentences to statements revolving around being supported pain free and confident??
    Thank you again….
    - AmyHager
      2 years ago
      
      correct
- JoelElfman
  2 years ago
  
  Lots of great material here. The “Moving” in the title is a bit ambiguous. “Moving” could be related to business, attitude, and personal life. Not sure about the alternative titles just yet. You could do something like “Motivated Women Moving Muscles” which would be more simple & direct. Might not fit if you have a bigger umbrella.
  - DanielaBorgialli
    2 years ago
    
    thanks @joel. It’s really about moving more than muscle – once you start aligning the body other parts start to shift too… this is mind body soul work… 🙂
    - JoelElfman
      2 years ago
      
      Got it. And still “Moving” by itself feels too ambiguous. I’d love to see feedback on this from others. i know it’s way overdone, but to me, “Motivated Women Moving Mind & Body” feels better than leaving it so ambiguous. The other consideration that comes to mind, is that I imagine a Motivated Woman or person wanting clarity or some sense of the…Read More
      
      DanielaBorgialli
      2 years ago
      
      @joel – I appreciate this – it’s all in the cooker!!! 🙂
Brenda Uekert

• 2 years, 1 month ago

To date, I haven’t had a strong message. And I haven’t succeeded in bringing people into my main offering (Gutsy Women Finances community). I feel like there’s a mismatch between the people who follow me (older women) and the people I need to reach (younger women).

This summer, I created structure to my community, with a new theme each month.…Read More

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- JoelElfman
  2 years, 1 month ago
  
  Great article! The only thing I’m not clear on is what’s the community? Is it a FB group, just folks who get your email or something else?
  - Brenda Uekert
    2 years ago
    
    You’ve just given me an “aha” moment. My community is SO MUCH MORE than a FB group. No one’s ever asked me that before. I need to talk about what I mean by community. Thx!
- AmyHager
  2 years ago
  
  I love building around a larger MOVEMENT. Can’t wait to work with you deeper to figure out the attraction of your ideal client. I know we will be making small tweaks in the weeks ahead. We can’t solve all the issues by reading and looking at what you have done in the past. I do think this one is going to come clearer as we talk and work with…Read More
Brenda Uekert is with AmyHager

• 2 years, 1 month ago

Sharing Assignment #2 for me – identifying my target audience for my main offering – the Gutsy Women Finances community. Thoughts? Suggestions?

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- AmyHager
  2 years, 1 month ago
  
  These are very clear.
- JoelElfman
  2 years, 1 month ago
  
  nicely done. very clear
Brenda Uekert

• 2 years, 1 month ago

I’m playing catch up. Here’s my purpose, vision, and mission. Feedback is most welcome.

5 Comments
- Brenda Uekert
  2 years, 1 month ago
  
  Tagging @amymshannonhernandez-com
- AmyHager
  2 years, 1 month ago
  
  Adding Early and Mid Career Women makes it clearer. Right now, I can’t think of 1 single person who I know who needs your help. I want to read this and see the face of 1 person I know (or see my own face)
  - Brenda Uekert
    2 years, 1 month ago
    
    Are you supposed to see that person in the purpose and vision? In the qualifications? Yes, I watched the videos. Where am I disconnecting?
- AmyHager
  2 years, 1 month ago
  
  Are you clients using the word “safe haven”?
  - Brenda Uekert
    2 years, 1 month ago
    
    No. My first draft I had ‘escape from difficult circumstances.’ I’ve worked in the areas of domestic violence and elder abuse and have seen how the lack of money – or handing over money decisions to someone else – traps women in lousy relationships. Trying to capture that sense.
Brenda Uekert

• 2 years, 1 month ago

Hello! I just joined and am introducing myself. I’m a Sociologist, Financial Coach, founder of the Gutsy Women Finances community, and full-time RVer. I travel the USA with my 3 cats. I’m looking forward to getting my messaging down so that it draws in my target audience. Glad to be here and looking forward to meeting you.

Here’s my Linktree:…Read More

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- AmyHager
  2 years, 1 month ago
  
  I love that you are wasting NO TIME and jumping right in!
  - Brenda Uekert
    2 years, 1 month ago
    
    Yep, precrastinator!
- Dr. Judy Osterhage
  2 years, 1 month ago
  
  Welcome aboard!
  - Brenda Uekert
    2 years, 1 month ago
    
    Thanks!
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• 2 years, 1 month ago
JulianneMiller, AFC®

• 2 years, 1 month ago

I need a little help with some brainstorming please. My clients are often busy and distracted with everyday life that they don’t focus on what is most important to them or aren’t focused on their dreams and goals. I haven’t found a shorter marketing phrase that works for me. Any ideas?

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- Shannon
  2 years, 1 month ago
  
  Hi Julianne. Remember that people buy with emotions. “focus on dreams/goals” isn’t gonna sell, or at least be painfully hard to sell. So, what do THEY WANT more than anything else?
  - JulianneMiller, AFC®
    2 years, 1 month ago
    
    Thank you let me mull this over and put some emotion to what they’re thinking and wanting when they come. I know they want calm, they want peace, they want someone to listen and “hear” them. They want direction, organization, professionalism, resources. Just brainstorming. I’ll reflect on some of this. Get out the juicy burger again 🙂
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