Hi Joel, will you have a visual that goes with the text?

Hi Joel! Wonder if using simpler, conversational words would make your piece even more powerful? Win over vs trumps; power through, knee jerk reactions vs anticipatory. Simplify and tighten it up perhaps? Also, perhaps refining your viewpoint; often willpower can only get you so far; then what? Seriously, consider HYPNOSIS — and why? FACT:…Read More

Hi Kerstin, This is very simple and clear. I would consider opening w/ Fact 2, and moving Fact 1 down, German is easy. For Fact 3, you might consider taking out that grammar is the hard part and stay w/ logical. And I would switch the last sentence around to emphasis, you can start speaking w/ others, even w/o perfect grammar. I think it makes a…Read More

Hi Kerstin, what if you try to shorten and simplify each Fact so that a 12-year old can understand it quickly — that’s the average reading comprehension of us here in the US anyway. Perhaps a version that is less academic/intellectual may be more powerful and to the point?

Hi Nancy. The playbook is the same every single month. 😉 Go to The Starter Kit Section (https://contentpersonalityclub.com/courses/starter/) and you can print them for the rest of the year! Let me know if you have any other questions about this. <3

Joel – who are your Zoom Mates this month in your pod? You’ll want to tag them so they can review this and give feedback!

Hello Joel, I am one of your Zoom Mates. For the title, I would prefer Is Willpower the Best Motivator/Motivation for Change? I can relate to the fact that you present and find them compelling to try hypnosis. Fact 1: I would use nouns for all reasons. Fact 2, I would add the horse as an example to visualize what you mean. Let’s imagine a horse…Read More

Maybe make the Myth an erroneous statement to make it more catchy. Like “You have to go through the misery of white-knuckling-it to change your life.”

Hi Amy! We are working on tagging and trying to get it set up so we can tag the name. Right now it is tagged by email address – which is not so helpful.

Who is in your Zoom Mate pod this month?

This is awesome! Be sure to post as a written post AND then do a video on the same content. Let’s see which performs better.

Hi Amy C, this is really strong. My favorite fact, followed by your CTA are genius. Of the Facts, the 90% for me was the strongest. I would consider moving that into 1st FACT position. And move the thoughts to the bottom or somewhere below. I have a minor disconnect with the title, I feel like either. the “all” should come out or “blues” becomes…Read More