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    DanielaBorgialli

    1 year, 3 months ago

    Draft!! 8 week introduction to Argentine Tango

    Take your first steps to go from spectator to dancer. In this 8 week course

    1. We create a solid foundation upon which to build your social Argentine Tango.
    2. We learn how to use the most natural and comfortable body position for dancing.
    3. We connect with our partner, the music, and the community of dancers.

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    • Overall this is okay, and I like what we did on Friday more.

      That being said – this feels a little cut & dry. I would consider adding a little more flavor.

      Take your first steps from toe-tapping observer to swaying your hips in sync w/ your parter In this 8 week course

      1. We help you create a solid foundation upon which to build your social Argentine Tango.
2. We teach you how to use the most natural and comfortable body position for dancing. (Is is the “most natural & comfortable body position” same for everyone, if not then maybe “most natural & comfortable body positions unique for you”
3. We connect with our partner, the music, and the community of dancers. – This seems like this would be happening during the 8 weeks, not at the end. We experienced connecting w/ our partner, the music and to the community of dancers.

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