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Did anyone save the transcript or chat? I got so caught up in the conversation, thinking about my message, and listening to others, I completely forgot to save anything. My bad!
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KerstinPeters is with JoelElfman and TinaJones
Who is available and interested in meeting this Friday, November 11, either at 10:30 AM or 11 AM ET to get support with their draft for this month’s message? I will set up a Zoom meeting.
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I’m in.
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Great. I will post the link tomorrow.
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Im in
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Kerstin Peters is inviting you to a scheduled Zoom meeting. Please join us. We will work on the November message.
Topic: My Meeting with Fellow Content Personality Members
Time: Nov 11, 2022 11:00 Eastern Time (US and Canada)Join Zoom Meeting
https://us06web.zoom.us/j/87071997774?pwd=Uk51WXF5bFBDL1YrVGttNTVHMXhZZz09Meeting ID: 870 7199…Read More
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Great review today. Got phenomenal feedback from @KerstinPeters & @SusanLazarHart
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I agree. Thank you, @JoelElfman and @SusanLazarHart. If you want to join the group for future sessions, please let me know. If there is interest, we can meet once or twice a month to help each other with the messaging of the monthly content.
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Does anyone know where the example SHannon used in her facebook that she taught from last week?
I’ve gotten this far, I have challenged myself to get this on my facebook today- I want to honor my commitment to myself and my businessI would love to see her example
here are the directions from my notes
Craft your opening line that…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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I think the next segment is the client story? or is that just before… this segment is for you
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Go to the session notes (first session of each month) and it is at the bottom of the page.
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Hi all! I’m having an issue accessing the calendar today. Anyone else? Here’s the error – I’ve tried on cellular and WiFi.
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Thanks, Beth. Let me get IT to look into it. I wonder if it is a phone issue. Try your computer. But, for no, here is the zoom link (it is the same zoom link every week): https://us02web.zoom.us/j/83461500974?pwd=Vlcwbk5iWFg1WVJxODJ4RThZWUZoZz09
Meeting ID: 834 6150 0974
Passcode: joyful
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Feedback welcome. This one is for my Gutsy Women Finances community.
Here’s a major reason why you continue to struggle with money, even though you have a decent income.
You weren’t taught a thing about how to manage your money growing up. Now you don’t know where to start and you haven’t found anyone you can really trust to guide you o…Read More
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I like it. But, there is a disconnect for me between the quiz and the community. You say this is for your Gutsy community but then you start the story with the quiz and the CTA is about taking the quiz, not joining a community. There isn’t any context for the community when you talk about it in the story. I would say this piece is about getting…Read More
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Thanks Annette. Perhaps the key is to work on two separate pieces – quiz and community. I’ll see what I can work up.
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Brenda – great job diving in and taking action. Woohoo!
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Hi Brenda,
I love the opening.
And I think you have a wonderful story about Madison & the club.
Did Madison take the quiz before or after she joined Gutsy Women Club? Your mention of some of the things you did w/ her made me curious. Are the exercises and your instructions part of the Club something different? What do I get from the club if I…Read More-
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Thanks, Joel. I’m going to separate the quiz from the GWF community. That should make things a whole lot clearer.
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would love some feedback. Is it compelling?
Here is a key reason your hormones are behaving badly, even though you are eating a healthy diet and taking DIM.
Your minerals are out of whack. You have too much iron and not enough copper.
What do I mean by that?None of us wants to bust our butt at the gym, eat kale, and take a boatload of…Read More
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taking DIM? It’s a powerful story. Not sure you need this at the end – (which are BIG issues costing you time, money, joy, and your sanity). You’ve unearthed those pieces in your story.
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Thanks! I’ll take that out. DIM is a common supplement, but I might need to think of something else to put there.
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instead of taking DIM, you can just mention supplements in general. Plus, DIM & DM are somewhat similar, someone skimming might not pay enough attention.
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I’d love some feedback on this:
Here’s a major reason why you keep starting the new year under a cloud of money worries.
You’re getting sucked into the holiday shopping frenzy and you’re not planning ahead.
Let me explain. None of us wants to start the new year feeling like it will take forever just to “catch up” from our holiday…Read More
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I like this a lot. I just have a few suggestions for tightening it a bit.
This isn’t a big deal but I don’t think the question mark works. “Yet each November, you get geared up for Black Friday and all the super discounts. Maybe you’re even hunting down deals before you carve into the Thanksgiving turkey and before you know it, you’ve got p…Read More
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Wow, Annette! Thanks so much. I made the changes.
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You’re welcome!
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My thought leader content…
Does this make you feel like buying?Here is the key reason why your hair is dull and lifeless even though you take care of your hair with quality hair products.
It’s because you have metal and mineral build-up and your hair could use a detox!
It’s frustrating to spend lots of money on quality, pro…Read More
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Aimee, Not sure I’d go into the specific elements. And I’m not sure how your product can counteract the water issue. I really have no idea what goes into a hair detoxing session, but maybe your audience does?
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Thank you so much Brenda! I appreciate your feedback. I plan to use an image with the minerals and metals that are most harmful to the hair with a small explanation of the damage they cause to the hair. As well as a before and after photo of a client’s detox session. I would love to hear your thoughts on those visuals.
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I agree with Brenda about not using the specific elements. Do you have a story about someone who did the detox and how fabulous their hair was?
For the first sentence I’d say, “Here is the key reason your hair is dull and lifeless even though you use high quality hair products.”
“You have heavy metal and mineral build-up.”
What do I mean by…Read More
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This is soooooo helpful, thank you so much Annette. I prefer short and swet, but I’m learning that it doesn’t need to be like that all the time.
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You’re welcome!
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We missed you! <3
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I do. I will email it to you.