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I had mentioned in one of the sessions that I was featured in a new LEVANTA online magazine. I am excited to share the link with you: https://issuu.com/design.your.plate.
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Beautiful people – Inspired Beyond Belief is open – but only for clients and students.
So….shhhhh please don’t share yet! 🙂Here is your code: IBB100 – it takes $100 off your ticket for January 3 and 4.
Are you going to join us and make 2023 your best year in business (and life!) yet?
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Here is my first draft for the landing page for my three-month beginners course, Learn German Through Art:
Wouldn’t it be great if you could communicate in everyday German?
Learn German Through Art – A German Course Focusing on Everyday Conversations to get you talking with German speakers quickly and confidently
In this interactive c…Read More
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I like this overall Kerstin, short and to the point. I wonder if you could include something that confirms I do not need to be an “artist” to enjoy this course, and also something to encourage me if I know absolutely “no German” now. Just to clarify who this program is for in a bit more detail.
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Great questions, Donna!
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Hello Donna, thanks for the suggestion. While I mention it when I talk about my courses, I should add: Are you worried about your artistic skills? If you can draw stick men, you can participate. I don’t teach you how to draw but how to use visual images that help you to remember new vocabulary.
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I like this a lot. It does feel a little cut & dry. May get a little granular. How does the class have fun. Is there a particular fun exercise that you do, would it be okay to mention something about it. I’m wondering if any of your students have some funny stories about a situation where their conversational skill came in handy. Getting…Read More
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Hello Joel, I appreciate your feedback. With every month of Content Personality Club, I update my website. Karen Joy Fritz had also some great ideas. My website was just relaunched. We are still ironing out issues. I should be able to do my own updates by next week. Therefore, I have not added the September update. Please check it out at…Read More
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Happy to help. Page looks good. The quote on the left is biig, bold, and negative. Can you add more so there is a transformation state at the end “…and now, I easily talk to…”
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Thanks, Joel. It is always a great help to get some fresh eyes to look at your content.
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Here’s my copy for the TinyBiz Blueprint pilot course:
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)Serious About Simplifying?
Architect Your 1 Page Blueprint for Your Simplest Possible Business
support your lifestyle while you do your good in the world[Count Me In] button jumps down to buy button
Whether your decision to simplify…Read More
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I feel like this might be too long and could be more concise. I don’t think you need to use the word pilot because it makes it sound like you are creating a blueprint for a pilot program not necessarily a business.
I am not fond of the word architect. It’s not relatable and architecting something doesn’t sound simple or easy. I think design,…Read More
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I agree with Annette. I would replace the word architect with create or design because you want your plan to be flexible and unique and not strict and without any tolerances. I would use the word pilot in a subtitle.
Design Your Custom TinyBiz Blueprint – a four-week pilot program to downshift your business to have more time, attention, and…Read More -
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Great advice from Annette and Kerstin. You do not need to say it is pilot program. It is a four-week program.
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Here’s my landing page copy draft for a free discovery call with me.
Tame your wild hormones, clear your brain fog, and get your joy and your life back!
If you are tired of feeling like crap, you need to book your Nutrition Game Plan session where we’ll uncover what is preventing you from feeling amazing and the steps you need to take to get f…Read More
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“Tame your wild hormones” is a how – it’s not something I know I want.
Maybe change up “If you are…” to “Are you…” so the reader seems more engaged and giving you yesses along the way.
Again in the benefits, causing my hormones to behave badly is a how. Foods and habits causing sleeplessness, brain fog, irritability… those are things I…Read More
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Thank you , I appreciate your feedback!
Interesting. I think you are the first woman I’ve encountered who isn’t interested in hormones. Now, hormones aren’t actually the problem, it’s mineral dysregulation, but no one is going to be seeking that so that’s why I use hormones since that is what they complain about. But I can add some symptoms.
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Re: “Tame your wild hormones” – i hear what @karen is saying above about it being a “how” and yet – so many of us hear “it’s your hormones” – I think it has become common vernacular for women to blame “everything” on their “hormones”. I like it!!! Maybe it’s at the end – you will help them “tame them”….
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Yeah, I hear “my hormones” all the time. It’s not actually hormones that are the problem, it’s mineral dysregulation, but no one is going to be looking to balance their minerals. Mineral dysregulation is behind everything.
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