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Hey Joel! Reach out to @amymshannonhernandez-com via email and she can get it to you. She did save it before we closed the meeting. Woohoo!
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Thanks @amymshannonhernandez-com – a little confused – for clarity are you suggesting change how I stated the “wouldn’t it be nice…” sentences to statements revolving around being supported pain free and confident??
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correct
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Ok, so taking action and would love feedback @nancychen1gmail-com, @brhwcoachinggmail-com, @amymshannonhernandez-com… Thanks
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I love it – quick, powerful and needed. I read and process VERY quickly so it was ok for me… but I can see how it might be “too fast” for others to keep up with.
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I totally couldn’t keep up with the words. But, the messaging is very powerful.
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I slowed it down to .75 and it was really easy.
Also, the crash sound effect is too early. Hold it for when you put the 40% fact on the screen.
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Thanks! very helpful… adjustments will be made and posted today!!
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Thank you @aslcivicagmail-com, love the feedback!
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<3
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Malinda, this is really good. Possible small considerations for tweaking. I’m with Amy H on the timing of the Breaking Glass. Although I might go further, and right after you shatter the glass, I would consider changing the language to 40% of trafficking is Male. You’ve shattered the glass for the reveal, For me, the extra panel to get “Male” did…Read More
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Thanks, Joel, I have been on the search for a GIF that would work for that exact spot… no luck yet though =(. I may post without it and then on the next one add that!
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nothing on giphy. Too bad. If it’s important, I wonder what it would cost on Fivver or some other place to make. Good Luck!
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Nice multimedia piece, Malida! What if you start with”Myth: Sex trafficking is a girls……” then “Fact: it’s a boys ,…” because the word ‘Myth’ might keep me reading, whereas I may not otherwise ( I already know trafficking is a girl issue). Also the end, how about a quick phrase about what your #film is raising $$ for (a doc on ….. X% goes…Read More
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Thank you for the feedback… more videos to come!
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Great job, loved this and very emotive and powerful!
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Thanks, Nancy!!
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Thanks Shannon!