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Draft of my Brand Commitment Statements.
• What is yours to do concerning your clients?
We are committed to helping business owners eradicate stress and anxiety commonly associated with business finances by understanding their goals and financial needs so that they can pay themselves first and pay their staff a living wage.• What is you…Read More
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I think I can probably weed out Humanity and Spiritual. Those 2 I had THE ABSOLUTE HARDEST time with! – Personal – I am struggling with how this one truly looks, but looking at my kids financial upbringing and seeing how there is a lack for young adults / highschool ages, I would like to have something for the 13-25 demographic, I just do not…Read More
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Tanya – i really really love this “a financial future that energizes them” – such a great thing! (cuz i think finances and i’m only energized by the panic i feel!!! 🙂 )
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Good Afternoon friends! I’ve posted my long form and a link to the video for how the Revenue PI came to be.
Hey Hey! My name is Tanya, and today I wanted to introduce myself and tell you the story of how The Revenue PI came to be.
The medical field has been near and dear to my heart for as long as I can remember. As a kid, I wanted to be a…Read More
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I think this is brilliant
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I love how you combined the two versions like we talked about in the club meeting, this is so much better and has much more emotion than the one I listened to Wednesday. I didn’t watch this video version, just read it, but I think it’s great!
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I love this!
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Hi lovelies!
I am working on my vision statement. I am working off of my Universal Truth: Embracing your emotional relationship with food heals your mind, body and soul.The Mission:
We believe creating awareness around your (a, the?) relationship with food can heal the world.I am struggling with ” your, a, the” also is “the world” too broad?
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I would keep it ‘your’. What you do is very personal.
How does our relationship with food help heal the world? It is too broad the way it is written now. Why is this important? -
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I agree with Amy, if your vision is around the “your” your mission should be too. (“Embracing your…” and creating awareness around you…”) It’s more personal. I also don’t think world here is too broad. If one person at a time can be healed / have awarenesss around food then essentially you’re healing the world, just one person at a time 🙂
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Thank you Tanya
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I would leave the “your” but I am not clear how the personal awareness about food is healing the world.
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DIRECT OFFER EMAIL – Draft 1
Used the magic word, “repeatable”!
Comments invited!Hello ,
Do you want to build more influence at work so that you can reach your goals?
If so, I would like to work with you in my PILOT Leadership Program designed for Asian women. This group program delivers the same system that has transformed many…Read More
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Forgot the title: CAN BEING ASIAN SABOTAGE YOUR CAREER?
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I would remove the word PILOT. You know what you are doing and you can help these women. Adding Pilot makes this seem like it isn’t real. Like you are experimenting and not the leader you really are.
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Thanks for your feedback, Amy – it’s making more sense to me now.
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Nice work Nancy.
CAN BEING ASIAN SABOTAGE YOUR CAREER? (Not crazy about this title. Is this about their DNA, their cultural beliefs or others beliefs about Asians. Which one or ones are you addressing)
I would make sure you hammer home, Who this is for, Asian woman, and Why, cultural heritage. Make sure they feel this is tailored to them, and…Read More
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Good Morning Everyone! I am trying this video thing out (I am live/ In person) I am trying to play around with equipment and lighting.
I’ve put a few qualifiers into the video. Any and all feedback welcome
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Hi Tanya, love your down-to-earth and friendly “let’s talk” energy. Your BQ section sounds good; but it kind of fades away from being punchy — last 2 bullets make it too long? and the section seems to fade into a “what we can do for you” — clearer separation between the two might be more effective. Good CTA; but “bankrupt” sounds…Read More
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Thanks so much Nancy for the feedback!!! Im working on making these changes! Can’t wait to record a new video 😁
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I felt like I was getting lost in the suppose to”s. Would you consider giving common things and a taste of the how to get back on track?
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OHHH BABY! I love these. As you most likely know, they are repetitive – so do you have a favorite three?