• SUBJECT: LEAD CONVERSION TOOL
    Hi folks!
    I’m struggling with my Title and Subtitle for my Lead Conversion Tool for my Level 5 client and I’d love some feedback.
    Level 5 client:
    * women healthcare professionals
    * verging on burnout
    * despite doing a”all the things” to stay healthy and happy
    * they know something needs to change but they’re…Read More

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    • Hi @annannbecks-co – the ‘reclaim yourself’ subtitle doesn’t resonate with me. It feels murky. I’m not sure what that means. Can you use different wording there? I like the rest of it. The title feels clear and I like that different levels of assessment will lead to different suggestions/outcomes.

    • Reverse your path to Burnout: Get clarity on your ONE next step to reclaim yourself.

      i like the title because it reminds me of what could happen…but I agree with sara about the word reclaim. how about changing it to protect?

  • Updated my Mission, Vision & Purpose (using the module in CPC). Would love your feedback! Thank you!

    PURPOSE: Universal truth: WHY am I in business?

    **Women empowered to live fully, true to themselves, create potent impact in their families, communities, business and the world.

    VISION: the HOW, public facing (on Home Page, in contracts,…Read More

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  • DIRECT OFFER POST- love your feedback. Struggling with HOOKS.

    Women, have you LOST your SELF?

    I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in.

    She said, “I feel like I’ve lost myself”, and wept. 🥺 Oh, I felt her pain and my heart ached for her. 💔

    But this isn’t an unusual e…Read More

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    • I wish I knew copy better to help you – let me sit with this

    • Love this, Ann!
      Feels like the immediate jump to losing yourself is a little too abrupt. Perhaps move that line. Does the following work for you?

      . . . .
      I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in. [add a detail or two to make this person and her burnout more concrete.]

      She summed i…Read More

      • ooo, thank you Dan! I appreciate this feedback! And thanks for the badassity link!😁

    • Ann – what if you add a testimonial from someone who has experienced a major shift?

  • CONNECT post from this month- mistakes (althought the mistake is buried)… bigger issue is I’ve posted 3 times on SM with different topics and had NO engagement… kinda discouraged. 😕 I’d love some feedback on this post. My niche is burnout in women healthcare professionals. Thank you! @clientsmshannonhernandez-com @amymshannonhernandez-com

    Are…Read More

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    • I’m not sure I have the answer on engagement on SM yet…I don’t think people like to READ much there – perhaps doing that as a carousel would help – but for email I like this writing here.

    • Know that even if someone is not engaging. They are still lurking. You will say something that hits their heart and they will feel seen and reach out. Don’t stop and keep showing up for them – but also yourself. ❤️
      I know this isn’t easy, but 3 posts isn’t ‘that many’. You keep getting clearer and clearer as you communicate and stay in…Read More

  • Content Type: Thought Reversal Post- is this clear and effective? Thank you. 🙏🏼

    Title: The LIMITATIONS of mindset work.

    As a leader, I’m sure you’ve done lots of mindset work over the years. And, it’s likely taken you a distance in your success.

    🔥 However, it is limited.

    Here’s the thing.

    💎 Mindset work uses energy, time, focus…Read More

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    • what do you mean by “And, it’s likely taken you a distance in your success.”?

      • @amyhager “And, it’s likely taken you a distance in your success.”? = mindset work has helped them to achieve some success… but mindset work requires focus, energy and time. Does this make sense? Is there a better way to say this?

    • I am getting lost in this too: It takes a toll on you… and frankly, you have other things requiring your time, attention, and desires to fulfill that you’d like to use your energy for, right?

      Mindset work involves dealing with your thoughts and beliefs. These exist as part of your nervous system, personality and Ego.

      As such, whenever cir…Read More

      • @amyhager Mindset work comes with a cost- time, energy and focus- essentially, when we do mindset work we’re wrestling wiith our thoughts, beliefs and stories.

        Maybe i should just take this section out? Would it make sense without it?

        Bottom line: circumstances are always changing which requires constant mindset work… which takes a toll on…Read More

    • small tweak: 🔥 Navigating changing your mindset while in a leadership role means there’s a lot of activation, which is where stress arises from. You’re constantly working with your mindset- trying to reset your thoughts and untangle from your beliefs.

    • This is SOOOO Clear: 💎 What if you could access a part of you that doesn’t change in response to circumstances? A part that remains unchanged even when your whole world feels turned upside down, giving you access to your deepest wisdom.

      💎 What if you didn’t need to wrestle with your thoughts and beliefs?

      You CAN reconnect with this part of you…Read More

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