Amy Civica

JoelElfman

• 2 years, 7 months ago

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Are you feeling frustration, stress, anxiety, conflicted within yourself or with different parts of your life? Tired of conducting life from the rear seats vs. being your best self.

If so, join my signature BodyHypnosis program. 12 weeks of 1:1 personal sessions and learn how to:

– Create more awareness around the…Read More

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- AmyHager
  2 years, 7 months ago
  
  I love the end. If Change is calling, book a call. ❤️
- Amy Flo-Yo
  2 years, 6 months ago
  
  Wow I love it – easy to read – great flow!
- Shannon
  2 years, 6 months ago
  
  Joel – this is clear and concise – good job. I wouldn’t say “if so join my …” because you are then asking them for a consult. See how that may feel like a mixed message to your peeps? You might say something like: If this sounds like what you are experiencing, you may benefit from program called xyz. See the difference?
  - JoelElfman
    2 years, 6 months ago
    
    Thanks Shannon, I will include the change
KerstinPeters

• 2 years, 7 months ago

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Guten Tag, NAME,

Do you want to become an engaged participant in German conversations?

I know how intimidating it is to learn and speak a new language from my own experiences. I did not dare to talk to people when I immigrated to Canada. I was so afraid everyone would think I was stupid because I could not express…Read More

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- AmyHager
  2 years, 7 months ago
  
  How did this go? I know you had it scheduled for after class. Do you have a link so we can see how it was laid out?
  - KerstinPeters
    2 years, 7 months ago
    
    Hi Amy, Here is the link to my newsletter: https://mailchi.mp/973bea04b7a5/german-news-5238392. I also posted it on my Facebook wall and shared it to my page and group. I had one comment and a couple of likes to the post. No response from the email.
    - KerstinPeters
      2 years, 7 months ago
      
      I will use the same template to promote my upcoming Facebook challenge this week. I will add FB lives to the mix to promote the event.
NancyChen

• 2 years, 7 months ago

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Used the magic word, “repeatable”!
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Hello ,

Do you want to build more influence at work so that you can reach your goals?

If so, I would like to work with you in my PILOT Leadership Program designed for Asian women. This group program delivers the same system that has transformed many…Read More

4 Comments
- NancyChen
  2 years, 7 months ago
  
  Forgot the title: CAN BEING ASIAN SABOTAGE YOUR CAREER?
- AmyHager
  2 years, 7 months ago
  
  I would remove the word PILOT. You know what you are doing and you can help these women. Adding Pilot makes this seem like it isn’t real. Like you are experimenting and not the leader you really are.
  The special benefits – like bonus coaching – is something that you can gift people once they are in. The feedback will happen because you build…Read More
  - NancyChen
    2 years, 7 months ago
    
    Thanks for your feedback, Amy – it’s making more sense to me now.
- JoelElfman
  2 years, 7 months ago
  
  Nice work Nancy.
  
  CAN BEING ASIAN SABOTAGE YOUR CAREER? (Not crazy about this title. Is this about their DNA, their cultural beliefs or others beliefs about Asians. Which one or ones are you addressing)
  
  I would make sure you hammer home, Who this is for, Asian woman, and Why, cultural heritage. Make sure they feel this is tailored to them, and…Read More
KerstinPeters

• 2 years, 7 months ago

Here are the results from taking part in my Summer Conversation Sessions:
1) You will become more comfortable and confident speaking German to be an engaged participant in conversations.
2) You will increase your vocabulary for small talk and feel part of the conversations.
3) You will connect and practice with other learners to feel supported…Read More

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- Annette Presley
  2 years, 7 months ago
  
  For #1 I’d maybe say You will comfortably and confidently engage in conversations with those who speak German.
  - KerstinPeters
    2 years, 7 months ago
    
    Thanks, Annette.
DianaLidstone

• 2 years, 7 months ago

TAKE #2 – 3 results….

Here’s the results for my 1-1 Coaching program (12 months) — input pls … Working with me you will…

1. co-create & implement a VISIBILITY ROADMAP which ensures that you STAND OUT as the undeniable authority in your field so you magnetize dream clients with ease (without paid ads and perhaps without social med…Read More

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- KerstinPeters
  2 years, 7 months ago
  
  1) I would say …” without paid ads and even social media”. Your clients can still use any or both, but you give them options to succeed without these tools. 2) Do you only work with entrepreneurs who already have a team? If I read this, I assume it is not for solopreneurs. 3) “… to pay yourself and your team competitively. You might even…Read More
  - DianaLidstone
    2 years, 7 months ago
    
    Thanks so much Kerstin!!!
- DianaLidstone
  2 years, 7 months ago
  
  #3 — Optimize your business model and metrics in your PROFIT Plan that will uncover hidden profit leaks and where you might be leaving money on the table.
  - AmyHager
    2 years, 7 months ago
    
    Uncover hidden profit leaks and where you might be leaving money on the table so we can optimize your PROFIT Plan for the future.
- Annette Presley
  2 years, 7 months ago
  
  I might change the second point to use a comma after bottleneck and then ‘allowing you the freedom you truly desire.’
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