Hi Carrie, it sounds really good, even clearer than when you read it last Wednesday (did you rework the first part ? feels like it anyway !).
One thing I feel is missing: when you tested the workflow to see if it could break : what is the use of that ? and Could you break it ? If it is to confirm that Zapier is a strong app, you may want to add…Read More

@carriewulfdenprofessionalsolutions-com – I saw this pop up on my FB feed last night before I drifted into dreamland. I noticed that you put the link IN the post, which actually flags FB to NOT show it to people. I recommend you repost with the link in the comment. I find Claire’s comment would also add more value to the post. Can you talk about…Read More

Understanding that your audience knows what Slack is, I think this sounds great, and Claire’s suggestion of tweaking the CTA/invitation to waitlist makes sense

Your 4th topic – how you learned to play violin again after having a stroke – is inspiring. It sounds like a great title for a TEDx talk!

Getting down to the wire! If @AMYMSHANNONHERNANDEZ-COM doesn’t have any objection, I’m posting.

I think the others can become clearer. Here is an example: 3. TOPIC: Making practice fun for children
Nobody likes doing things they have to do. So it should be no surprise when children resist music practice. I have worked with —number of kids— over the —number of years—, what questions do you have for me about how music practice can be…Read More

The 4 it is for me too – I did not have a stroke but I have not played the piano for decades. It is more difficult to play by ear. But my piano moved in to my new home, so I ll have to figure out how start again at some point 😉

#3 is fascinating to me. I remember getting guitar lessons but not really wanting to do them. I would have loved to have some exercises that encouraged me to pursue music.