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Email Number 3- if you read this email, would you want to know more about what food to eat and avoid? Hoping to get some discovery calls booked! @amymshannonhernandez-com @clientsmshannonhernandez-com
Subject Line: Does it rot?
Preview: How do you know if food is real?Hook Line: Something weird happened, I bought a croissant and decided…Read More
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agreed! less words = more clarity (in cases like this)
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I am creating a landing page for an online masterclass that I am hosting on 29 July 2024. Below is the text for the landing page (or you can have a look at the landing page here: https://wildbutterfly.myflodesk.com/nkh6awy5pc). Would love your thoughts everyone in the community and @amymshannonhernandez-com and @clientsmshannonhernandez-com on…Read More
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Did you watch the landing page training? It doesn’t seem so, my suggestion is to go back to it and watch it.
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Thanks! Which month is the landing page training? I’ll add that to the resources I need to watch.
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Thanks will watch this!
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@clientsmshannonhernandez-com @amymshannonhernandez-com my one concern about this piece – and I would love to hear your thoughts….is the idea that IF I am saying I helped others (without taking the credit or helping myself) and then offer to help others…..it seems like more of the same (*shrug emoji) I guess I am not clear how to say that I…Read More
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I did not – wasn’t sure it was clear but I think I will – I’ll let you know what happens. Seems like it might be right for LinkedIn. Thanks @clientsmshannonhernandez-com
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Anthea Mumby posted a new activity comment
Thanks @clientsmshannonhernandez-com. Updates done!
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Don’t add fluff to the hook line
Hook Line: Something weird happened, I bought a croissant and decided not to eat it, and then A YEAR LATER- the croissant is still here 😷😷
Get straight to it: I bought a croissant and decided not to eat it, and then A YEAR LATER- the croissant is still here