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SUBJECT: LEAD CONVERSION TOOL
Hi folks!
I’m struggling with my Title and Subtitle for my Lead Conversion Tool for my Level 5 client and I’d love some feedback.
Level 5 client:
* women healthcare professionals
* verging on burnout
* despite doing a”all the things” to stay healthy and happy
* they know something needs to change but they’re…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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@sarasarafins-com Thank you. Shannon said the same thing. 😊 I struggle with naming things… always better to dialogue with others.
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Reverse your path to Burnout: Get clarity on your ONE next step to reclaim yourself.
i like the title because it reminds me of what could happen…but I agree with sara about the word reclaim. how about changing it to protect?
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Updated my Mission, Vision & Purpose (using the module in CPC). Would love your feedback! Thank you!
PURPOSE: Universal truth: WHY am I in business?
**Women empowered to live fully, true to themselves, create potent impact in their families, communities, business and the world.
VISION: the HOW, public facing (on Home Page, in contracts,…Read More
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Hey Ann – would love to connect as I’m also on a mission to eradicate burn out – but mine is with small business owners, especially women! Hope to see you on a call – I’ve just joined the Club!
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@diana-lidstonegmail-com Love to connect with you!! And Welcome to the Club!!
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![Profile picture of AmyHager]()
Do you want to be more specific to the women leaders you want to empower?
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![Profile picture of Ann Becks]()
@amymshannonhernandez-com I’ll chat with you about this in our call today!! Thanks for the question.
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![Profile picture of DianaLidstone]()
I sent you a message on FB! Let’s chat soon
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DIRECT OFFER POST- love your feedback. Struggling with HOOKS.
Women, have you LOST your SELF?
I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in.
She said, “I feel like I’ve lost myself”, and wept. 🥺 Oh, I felt her pain and my heart ached for her. 💔
But this isn’t an unusual e…Read More
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I wish I knew copy better to help you – let me sit with this
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![Profile picture of Ann Becks]()
Vee, I absolutely love how real you are!! 😁
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![Profile picture of Dan Lewis]()
Love this, Ann!
Feels like the immediate jump to losing yourself is a little too abrupt. Perhaps move that line. Does the following work for you?. . . .
I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in. [add a detail or two to make this person and her burnout more concrete.]She summed i…Read More
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![Profile picture of Ann Becks]()
ooo, thank you Dan! I appreciate this feedback! And thanks for the badassity link!😁
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![Profile picture of CarrieWulf]()
Ann – what if you add a testimonial from someone who has experienced a major shift?
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![Profile picture of Ann Becks]()
That’s a great idea. Thanks Carrie!
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Have a great couple of weeks and I will be back for week 3. Don’t forget to go to the calendar to get the codes to register for the newsletter workshop March 20 and Lead Magnet workshop in April for free. ❤️
Remember if you post content on the wall, go to the two below your post and read. Ask curious questions if you don’t feel clear when…Read More
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CONNECT post from this month- mistakes (althought the mistake is buried)… bigger issue is I’ve posted 3 times on SM with different topics and had NO engagement… kinda discouraged.
I’d love some feedback on this post. My niche is burnout in women healthcare professionals. Thank you! @clientsmshannonhernandez-com @amymshannonhernandez-comAre…Read More
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I’m not sure I have the answer on engagement on SM yet…I don’t think people like to READ much there – perhaps doing that as a carousel would help – but for email I like this writing here.
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Thank you Whitney!
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Know that even if someone is not engaging. They are still lurking. You will say something that hits their heart and they will feel seen and reach out. Don’t stop and keep showing up for them – but also yourself. ❤️
I know this isn’t easy, but 3 posts isn’t ‘that many’. You keep getting clearer and clearer as you communicate and stay in…Read More
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Hi @annannbecks-co – the ‘reclaim yourself’ subtitle doesn’t resonate with me. It feels murky. I’m not sure what that means. Can you use different wording there? I like the rest of it. The title feels clear and I like that different levels of assessment will lead to different suggestions/outcomes.