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Are you feeling frustration, stress, anxiety, conflicted within yourself or with different parts of your life? Tired of conducting life from the rear seats vs. being your best self.If so, join my signature BodyHypnosis program. 12 weeks of 1:1 personal sessions and learn how to:
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Joel – this is clear and concise – good job. I wouldn’t say “if so join my …” because you are then asking them for a consult. See how that may feel like a mixed message to your peeps? You might say something like: If this sounds like what you are experiencing, you may benefit from program called xyz. See the difference?
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Do you want to become an engaged participant in German conversations?
I know how intimidating it is to learn and speak a new language from my own experiences. I did not dare to talk to people when I immigrated to Canada. I was so afraid everyone would think I was stupid because I could not express…Read More
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How did this go? I know you had it scheduled for after class. Do you have a link so we can see how it was laid out?
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Hi Amy, Here is the link to my newsletter: https://mailchi.mp/973bea04b7a5/german-news-5238392. I also posted it on my Facebook wall and shared it to my page and group. I had one comment and a couple of likes to the post. No response from the email.
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Here are the results from taking part in my Summer Conversation Sessions:
1) You will become more comfortable and confident speaking German to be an engaged participant in conversations.
2) You will increase your vocabulary for small talk and feel part of the conversations.
3) You will connect and practice with other learners to feel supported…Read More2 Comments-
For #1 I’d maybe say You will comfortably and confidently engage in conversations with those who speak German.
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Feedback on this business card draft?? Putting qualifiers right up front.
Yeah it’s busy… but if the objective is to define the message and then shout it out there….. QR code goes right to my free consult scheduling page.
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This is a great example of how else to BOLD Qualifiers in a new way! Susan, if you want to share this image in the big FB group under our interview from last week – that would be awesome. https://www.facebook.com/1131797962/videos/347375547561171/
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Had a consult call yesterday – first time I have spoken with someone where I said right up front that my single session is no longer for sale… that the longer program is needed to get results! I used my bold qualifiers to describe the people who achieve the best results from working with me. He and his wife took lots of notes and were…Read More
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