Claire- is it possible to break this down into 3 sections? I got lost in all the info and what I was joining.

Claire – like this a lot! I think to really make this pop you can talk a little bit about what the inner compass is and what the wound healing is. I think this will strengthen the piece and pull people in more.

Liked this, Claire. I second Shannon’s comment. I also get the problem state of confusion and mixed messages around women’s power. Bravo!

What about identifying more of what feminine energy id rather than focusing on masculine energy or what healing looks/feels like?

Instead of: Here is what a client went through – could you say something like “here is what a recent client experienced during our work together” – to tie it more to her work with you?

I love the way you explained that it’s the connection between the partners is more important than memorizing the steps. When the connection is there and you are listening to their movements, the steps will come. Fabulous!

Will you re-post this video now that you have practiced and can you add a little more detail of the feeling/emotion that creates that connection between partners?

I think this is great, Can you write it how you would post it? I feel like you are still sharing a draft/notes here.

This can flow better:
The steps and patterns fail you because you’re neglecting to consider your partnered communication and connection.

This is keeping you stuck and from progressing to dancing with better dancers.

Steps and patterns are failing preventing you from dancing with better dancers because you’re neglecting to consider your p…Read More

I think I would be more direct in the hook. How about using the one that is on the handout (I think this was you?) “To People That Want to Feel Fulfilled But Don’t Know How to Get Started “

I apologize, I don’t understand the example, “I feel I must be in the gift of myself”. This sentence doesn’t make sense to me personally. Is there supposed to be a comma or some other grammatical marker in this sentence. In the alternative is there another example of a limiting belief you can use from a client or somewhere else.

I’ve been trying to translate “I feel I must be in the gift of myself” to french! IS this an expression? or are we talking about deservedness? worthiness?