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HI Everyone,
I decided to try something different w/ my 9 word email.
I thought I would use this format to test a possible opt-in gift and hopefully gain some feedback. The video/audio is really rough cut, but I think that’s okay. Feel free to give feedback.
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delete: Re-record it? Make changes?
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Thank you for all the suggestions Amy. I will implement.
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Does anyone have the chat from yesterday saved? I had created a Word doc w/ notes from the session, but for some damn reason it did not save. I’m going to listen again, and recreate. The chat would be helpful if someone has it. Thanx in advance. Joel
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Hey Joel! Reach out to @amymshannonhernandez-com via email and she can get it to you. She did save it before we closed the meeting. Woohoo!
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Thanks Shannon!
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Hi everyone – I wanted to drop some content ideas for a landing page for a 10 week course – Moving Motivated Women…
Any ideas or direction are welcome – thank you!#1 what do you want them to buy into?
I want them to buy into a 10 week course – a holistic movement based 10 week course2. Ask what is my audience frustrated…Read More
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Great first draft! On the questions, the way to level up your messaging is to get away from the focus of “pain” and look at the future. So, for your questions, I have reworded them.
“wouldn’t it be nice to feel secure, supported, pain free and confident in my body! “ – How does YOUR body feel when you are supported, pain free? Can you imagi…Read More-
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Thanks @amymshannonhernandez-com – a little confused – for clarity are you suggesting change how I stated the “wouldn’t it be nice…” sentences to statements revolving around being supported pain free and confident??
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correct
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Lots of great material here. The “Moving” in the title is a bit ambiguous. “Moving” could be related to business, attitude, and personal life. Not sure about the alternative titles just yet. You could do something like “Motivated Women Moving Muscles” which would be more simple & direct. Might not fit if you have a bigger umbrella.
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thanks @joel. It’s really about moving more than muscle – once you start aligning the body other parts start to shift too… this is mind body soul work… 🙂
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Got it. And still “Moving” by itself feels too ambiguous. I’d love to see feedback on this from others. i know it’s way overdone, but to me, “Motivated Women Moving Mind & Body” feels better than leaving it so ambiguous. The other consideration that comes to mind, is that I imagine a Motivated Woman or person wanting clarity or some sense of the…Read More
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@joel – I appreciate this – it’s all in the cooker!!! 🙂
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