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Feedback welcome. This one is for my Gutsy Women Finances community.
Here’s a major reason why you continue to struggle with money, even though you have a decent income.
You weren’t taught a thing about how to manage your money growing up. Now you don’t know where to start and you haven’t found anyone you can really trust to guide you o…Read More
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Thanks Annette. Perhaps the key is to work on two separate pieces – quiz and community. I’ll see what I can work up.
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Brenda – great job diving in and taking action. Woohoo!
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Hi Brenda,
I love the opening.
And I think you have a wonderful story about Madison & the club.
Did Madison take the quiz before or after she joined Gutsy Women Club? Your mention of some of the things you did w/ her made me curious. Are the exercises and your instructions part of the Club something different? What do I get from the club if I…Read More-
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Thanks, Joel. I’m going to separate the quiz from the GWF community. That should make things a whole lot clearer.
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I’d love some feedback on this:
Here’s a major reason why you keep starting the new year under a cloud of money worries.
You’re getting sucked into the holiday shopping frenzy and you’re not planning ahead.
Let me explain. None of us wants to start the new year feeling like it will take forever just to “catch up” from our holiday…Read More
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I like this a lot. I just have a few suggestions for tightening it a bit.
This isn’t a big deal but I don’t think the question mark works. “Yet each November, you get geared up for Black Friday and all the super discounts. Maybe you’re even hunting down deals before you carve into the Thanksgiving turkey and before you know it, you’ve got p…Read More
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Wow, Annette! Thanks so much. I made the changes.
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You’re welcome!
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To date, I haven’t had a strong message. And I haven’t succeeded in bringing people into my main offering (Gutsy Women Finances community). I feel like there’s a mismatch between the people who follow me (older women) and the people I need to reach (younger women).
This summer, I created structure to my community, with a new theme each month.…Read More
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Great article! The only thing I’m not clear on is what’s the community? Is it a FB group, just folks who get your email or something else?
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You’ve just given me an “aha” moment. My community is SO MUCH MORE than a FB group. No one’s ever asked me that before. I need to talk about what I mean by community. Thx!
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I love building around a larger MOVEMENT. Can’t wait to work with you deeper to figure out the attraction of your ideal client. I know we will be making small tweaks in the weeks ahead. We can’t solve all the issues by reading and looking at what you have done in the past. I do think this one is going to come clearer as we talk and work with…Read More
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Brenda Uekert is with AmyHager
Sharing Assignment #2 for me – identifying my target audience for my main offering – the Gutsy Women Finances community. Thoughts? Suggestions?
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These are very clear.
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nicely done. very clear
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I’m playing catch up. Here’s my purpose, vision, and mission. Feedback is most welcome.
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Tagging @amymshannonhernandez-com
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Adding Early and Mid Career Women makes it clearer. Right now, I can’t think of 1 single person who I know who needs your help. I want to read this and see the face of 1 person I know (or see my own face)
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Are you supposed to see that person in the purpose and vision? In the qualifications? Yes, I watched the videos. Where am I disconnecting?
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Are you clients using the word “safe haven”?
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No. My first draft I had ‘escape from difficult circumstances.’ I’ve worked in the areas of domestic violence and elder abuse and have seen how the lack of money – or handing over money decisions to someone else – traps women in lousy relationships. Trying to capture that sense.
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I like it. But, there is a disconnect for me between the quiz and the community. You say this is for your Gutsy community but then you start the story with the quiz and the CTA is about taking the quiz, not joining a community. There isn’t any context for the community when you talk about it in the story. I would say this piece is about getting…Read More