Karen Joy Fritz

SaraFins

• 1 year, 2 months ago

H! Here is my first stab at a value content email. I did not use the 3 related tips format. Not sure if that is a must, but I felt it flowed better this week. Feedback appreciated!

Email subject line: Why focusing on your revenue could actually be hurting your business

and what to do instead

Hi TEST,

When it comes to keeping track…Read More

6 Comments
- DanielaBorgialli
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  I like this Sara. (Being a person who feels like Charlie Brown in class with the blah blah teacher -the minute people talk money/revenue / profit… huh?) I feel that I might like it shortened – you say “focus on profitability” – and my mind wants to know right away what that is and then vs what revenue is…. and then a tie in and your CTA….…Read More
  - SaraFins
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you for the input and your honesty!
- Blair Hope
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  I love this! I had a question about the difference between revenue and profitability, and then you answered it. You asked questions and shared tips without making me feel like I was doing something wrong, and when I realized I don’t do this – you offered a solution and hope!
  - SaraFins
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you so much, Blair! I’m glad it felt clear and helped you in some way.
- JoelElfman
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Hi Sara, I felt there was too much explanation. I think most people understand some of the things you were explaining. So I cropped considerably. If you want to keep more of the explanations, I would tighten it up.
  Technically, most of what is written is about making money & profit which could apply to marketing, sales, or other arenas.
  Maybe…Read More
  - SaraFins
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks for the thoughtful input, Joel!
JoelElfman

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Here is video,

& attached text for SM below.
Again, my eyes are all over the place, too many Ums, and a bit too much laughter, but tons of fun to shoot these Behind the Scenes posts.
All comments are welcome on video or on the short accompanying…Read More

2 Comments
- AmyHager
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  I think as you get more comfortable, it will be smoother. But, I also think this is starting to feel more like you! Keep recording the videos.
  - JoelElfman
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks, Amy!
JoelElfman

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Here is a new video,

& attached text for SM below for a new Behind the Scenes post.
My eyes are all over the place, too many Ums, and a bit too much laughter, but it was a fun piece to shoot.
All comments are welcome on video or on the short accompanying…Read More

2 Comments
- AmyHager
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  I almost feel you like you could go into a story of how you surprised yourself when you figured out you were protecting yourself. I really have no idea how I would answer your question or if this have ever happened to me. If I didn’t watch your video, I am clueless. So, maybe give a little more in the post.
  - JoelElfman
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks, Amy, I will work on it. Hope you are enjoying yourself in the wilds of Wyoming. 🙂
JoelElfman

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Here is a draft video, it hasn’t gone out yet, unless someone stumbles across it on YouTube,

My Content Personality is Live/In-person. The script is below, it roughly follows the video.

I have not designed the mentioned workshop yet, I thought using this Behind the Scenes video might be an interesting way to…Read More

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- RuthRoland
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  This is the best video I’ve seen from you, Joel! It’s warm and conversational. It’s just a tad disconcerting that you seem to be looking at my belly button most of the time instead of in my eyes. What if you dressed up the camera lens with a wig above and bowtie beneath? And hid your image (if that’s what you’re talking to)? You made good contact…Read More
- Shannon
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  THIS VIDEO is fantastic Joel! so smoothe and the messaging is fantastic. YAY. Like Ruth said, with time, you’ll be looking at us in our eyes. Keep it up!
  - JoelElfman
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks Ruth! I was trying to keep my eyes up, but I guess I started looking at my image again. The idea of putting a wig around the camera is hysterical. I was looking at cameras or a stand for my phone. I wasn’t quite seeing what I wanted. I guess I will look again. Thanks, again for your wonderful encouragement.
  - JoelElfman
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Hi Shannon, Thanks for your wonderful words. This one was fun, and thinking of a way to tie back to both my mailing list & testing the concept of this class w/ a waiting list was super cool! I don’t think I would have imagined that without the constant inspiration from you, Amy & the group. I’m still thinking of recording this one more time, any…Read More
AmyHager

• 1 year, 3 months ago

This was my attempt at bridging something I do often (cook) and my business. Great session this week, I look forward to seeing more of your content being shared, email, posted, published… whatever. Get it out there

https://www.facebook.com/amy.hager.58/posts/pfbid0NNeTXGHThMREdBrggYwx17gpRLXvUPcptaoTYam9udj3f8PaMbDJiYMKkP1gUgiil

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2 Comments
- DanielaBorgialli
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  i see… seems too easy!!! 🙂
- Shannon
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  @amymshannonhernandez-com I was SO impressed when I saw this post in my feed a couple days ago. You bridged it SO well.
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