• Here’s my landing page copy draft for a free discovery call with me.

    Tame your wild hormones, clear your brain fog, and get your joy and your life back!

    If you are tired of feeling like crap, you need to book your Nutrition Game Plan session where we’ll uncover what is preventing you from feeling amazing and the steps you need to take to get f…Read More

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    • “Tame your wild hormones” is a how – it’s not something I know I want.

      Maybe change up “If you are…” to “Are you…” so the reader seems more engaged and giving you yesses along the way.

      Again in the benefits, causing my hormones to behave badly is a how. Foods and habits causing sleeplessness, brain fog, irritability… those are things I…Read More

      • Thank you , I appreciate your feedback!

        Interesting. I think you are the first woman I’ve encountered who isn’t interested in hormones. Now, hormones aren’t actually the problem, it’s mineral dysregulation, but no one is going to be seeking that so that’s why I use hormones since that is what they complain about. But I can add some symptoms.

        I…Read More

    • Re: “Tame your wild hormones” – i hear what @karen is saying above about it being a “how” and yet – so many of us hear “it’s your hormones” – I think it has become common vernacular for women to blame “everything” on their “hormones”. I like it!!! Maybe it’s at the end – you will help them “tame them”….

      • Yeah, I hear “my hormones” all the time. It’s not actually hormones that are the problem, it’s mineral dysregulation, but no one is going to be looking to balance their minerals. Mineral dysregulation is behind everything.

  • Hey there! Slight delay in the replay. Please go here to view it from Wed’s meeting: https://us02web.zoom.us/rec/share/crFMhOydLdoe5adiLdrlDlDXL63uRj9xGrP8DMJYFWDdW0TXSqU3JyBI3CRhHI1x.kK1nz_SgV67UMMs4

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  • hello Everyone! (ok here it goes – Landing Page copy draft 1)
    1. Beginner Argentine Tango course 1: eight week course for those with little or no experience dancing.
    2. Tired of the day to day grind?
    Beginner Argentine Tango course 1: begin your journey to relieve your stress and improve your overall health
    Benefits:
    * improve your overall…Read More

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    • I feel like your Number 3 point should actually be your title! There is more excitement in that. My recommendation is to move this “Do you need social interactions? are you bored? do you have zoom fatigue? Then this is the beginning –” to the title
      and leave this “Join this Entry level course to Argentine Tango your first step to fun!” as the l…Read More

    • Zoom zone got you feeling bland? Tango your way to feeling grand!

      Enter the zesty world of beginning Argentine Tango and dance your way to balance, flexibility, strength, and endurance in a safe environment to laugh with new people. Argentine Tango – your first step to make exercise FUN!

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  • Great meeting today! Here are the links of examples that Brea shared with us today + @diana-lidstonegmail-com‘s…Read More

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