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hello Everyone! (ok here it goes – Landing Page copy draft 1)
1. Beginner Argentine Tango course 1: eight week course for those with little or no experience dancing.
2. Tired of the day to day grind?
Beginner Argentine Tango course 1: begin your journey to relieve your stress and improve your overall health
Benefits:
* improve your overall…Read More-
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Julianne – this is so juicy – and very helpful. I’m going to play some more with it but I really love it! Thank you for that!
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Zoom zone got you feeling bland? Tango your way to feeling grand!
Enter the zesty world of beginning Argentine Tango and dance your way to balance, flexibility, strength, and endurance in a safe environment to laugh with new people. Argentine Tango – your first step to make exercise FUN!
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Great meeting today! Here are the links of examples that Brea shared with us today + @diana-lidstonegmail-com‘s…Read More
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Hey guys — would love further feedback on this landing page? Would the word ‘stealers’ or wasters be better than saboteurs? This is the draft for the first iteration of the workshop. https://dianalidstone.com/uncover-hidden-profits/
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Diana – I have been thinking about wasters and stealers for several days!!! Not sure if you’ve chosen one – but I’m opting on “wasters”. – I feel like I want to steal more time to do things but I know that I waste time doing things that are distracting or?
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I think either works, but I like stealers better because waster implies that the person is wasting time rather than the activity taking up their time so they can’t do more important things.
I don’t know if this works better or not, but what about 10x productivity for you and your team.
And I would put 9 time stealers instead of 9 sabateurs at the end.
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I feel like your Number 3 point should actually be your title! There is more excitement in that. My recommendation is to move this “Do you need social interactions? are you bored? do you have zoom fatigue? Then this is the beginning –” to the title
and leave this “Join this Entry level course to Argentine Tango your first step to fun!” as the l…Read More