Activity – RuthRoland – Content Personality Club

RuthRoland

• 1 year, 7 months ago

**REVISED**

YOUR PATH TO MASTERY

1. Discover
Review your goals and dreams with us to choose the lesson length and type that best suits you.

2. Learn
Explore your chosen instrument in lessons with a master teacher.

3. Play
Enjoy self-expression and your growing music mastery.
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3 Comments
- AmyHager
  1 year, 7 months ago
  
  You haven’t used the word “experts” before – that I recall. Don’t you usually call them all teachers? I also feel like Learn is better for #2. Maybe #1 is Discover or Explore.
  - RuthRoland
    1 year, 7 months ago
    
    Well, right now it’s just me doing the sales calls. It will never be the teachers. I hope to eventually train someone else to help with the sales. So. “DISCOVER Review your goals and dreams with us to choose… ” Does that work? These 3 steps feel wordy/clunky to me. Maybe break up the sentences? Do you agree?
- JoelElfman
  1 year, 7 months ago
  
  Great material!
  1- if you teach children, then I think the end of the sentence is “…that best suits you or your child”
  2- sounds very analytical & boring, I would consider making it more conversation
  3- I don’t believe you need to improve skills to enjoy self-expression, so you might be better off w/ “Enjoy self-expression and increase your music mastery.”