Love your fun facts! Can we get even deeper/clearer.
1. I spent 5 years in Washington State as an Engineer on the 787 & 747 Fuselage (aircrafts or planes).
2. I love to paint anything and everything – especially —-fill in the blank—
3. I transform the lives of prisoners through education daily.

Airplane fuselage – Yeah! I love that one 😉

LOVE these – great job. and i LOVE painting rocks too!

I like them! Your New Year’s experience sounds so cool!

I love your 3 fun facts

I love your fun facts. Totally awesome. I am wondering if “practical healing & spirituality”, “life changes”, “life cycle” & “see beyond your experiences & your beliefs” need more specificity.

I got thrown off by the term “learners.” It suggests that they are already learning. Are you working with those who haven’t yet started learning the German language? I don’t easily pick up languages and I’ve not had great experiences with language teachers. I would want to know that you teach in a fun and supportive manner. That you’ll make it…Read More

I really like the 3rd statement to clients – it feels clear what you do and it feels light.
The 4th client statement – has supportive and support and feels less clear. Maybe something like… “…supportive learning community that upholds values of … ” or “…supportive learning community by offering …. ”
I like the industry statement and of…Read More

Here’s another possibility: I am committed to helping my clients speak German faster and with more confidence by incorporating fun visualization exercises and focusing on conversations.

Your 2nd statement would need the word ‘just’ before the part about kids otherwise it sounds like kids can’t learn the way you teach.