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hello Everyone! (ok here it goes – Landing Page copy draft 1)
1. Beginner Argentine Tango course 1: eight week course for those with little or no experience dancing.
2. Tired of the day to day grind?
Beginner Argentine Tango course 1: begin your journey to relieve your stress and improve your overall health
Benefits:
* improve your overall…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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![Profile picture of DanielaBorgialli]()
Julianne – this is so juicy – and very helpful. I’m going to play some more with it but I really love it! Thank you for that!
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Can’t wait to see the second draft on Wed
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![Profile picture of Annette Presley]()
Another tweak. Instead of “Then this is just the beginning!” how about something like Then you need to dance!
Instead of renew your social interactions how about make new friends, laugh, and feel like a human again.
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Zoom zone got you feeling bland? Tango your way to feeling grand!
Enter the zesty world of beginning Argentine Tango and dance your way to balance, flexibility, strength, and endurance in a safe environment to laugh with new people. Argentine Tango – your first step to make exercise FUN!
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![Profile picture of DanielaBorgialli]()
This so fun to read!!! lol!!! Thanks for bringing some joy to my tunnel vision!
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![Profile picture of KerstinPeters]()
Danielle, you have got some great suggestions here. I love how with every comment the piece gets better and better.
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I feel like your Number 3 point should actually be your title! There is more excitement in that. My recommendation is to move this “Do you need social interactions? are you bored? do you have zoom fatigue? Then this is the beginning –” to the title
and leave this “Join this Entry level course to Argentine Tango your first step to fun!” as the l…Read More