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PSA – I have a Love/Hate Relationship w/ Entertainment Hypnosis
– I once had a woman run away when I told her that I was a hypnotist. She ran shouting, “don’t look at me, don’t talk to me.”
Books, Movies, Videos, and more have helped create the myth that a hypnotist can control someone’s mind in trance.
These fictional beliefs and fears a…Read More -
Based on sharing this during the Content Personality Club, and some very helpful feedback, I cut this version down. And if I go to the new title, I’ll probably cut the entertainment hypnosis paragraphs further. At most, I’ll give this thing one more go around, before I finally get it out the door. It’s time to get to the next one. 🙂
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Here is the latest version of my PSA. V6 if you can believe it. Hopefully, it is getting cleaner & clearer.
PSA – I Have a Love/Hate Relationship w/ Entertainment Hypnosis
– I hate when an entertainment hypnotist uses the model and myth kept alive by so many movies, books, and videos that the hypnotist control someone’s mind. It makes people a…Read More -
What is your direct offer?
I offer Learn German Through Art German Courses Focusing on Everyday ConversationPSA: Self-Teaching a New Language is Easy and Everyone Can Do It
These days, you can find lots of language apps, online programmes and YouTube channels that promise you free and easy to follow resources to learn a new language…Read More
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Kerstin! I love what you do, and so well explained. I can relate: my husband is French, and his entire family is only French-speaking, so I was pretty motivated to learn the language!! I have done some of the apps and youtube channels and also some in-person courses. I can relate to the absolute frustration of trying to wrap my brain around…Read More
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Kerstin this is great. Your paragraphs are really, clear, clean and compelling for each idea. I would consider sub-headers for some of the them. Intention; Commitment; Discipline; Communication. You might move your story up, and consider a client story. The only part that really threw me off is your title. The title felt entirely counter-intuitive…Read More
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Joel, thank you for the feedback. I was not too excited about the title and will still work on a more compelling one. Thank you for your suggestions.
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I thought about several other Titles after Shannon’s title templates. How do you feel about the following?
Why You Shouldn’t Rely on Apps and Online Programmes to Learn a New Language
Why Learning a New Language with Apps and Online Programmes Will Leave You Frustrated
Why Hiring an Instructor to Learn a New Language Will Save You Time and I…Read More
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Here is a slightly shorter version with bolded main points:
These days, you can find many language apps, online programmes and YouTube channels that promise you free and easy to follow resources to learn a new language without an instructor. However, most people will experience frustration and waste a lot of time trying to teach themselves a…Read More
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…love your passion, it comes through here! Might it have more impact if you present your core argument point up front, like ” learning a language through fun, live interaction is way/infinitely/10X more effective than an online app”. And here’s why. I’d like to hear more about YOUR process up front; a bolder title would also convey your passion!
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Thank you, NancyChen for the suggestions. I am still not happy with the title but will nevertheless use it for a FB live. Do you have any suggestion for the title?
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Hello everyone, I am excited to be part of the club. I am looking forward to getting to know you better. I am Kerstin Peters, artist, art and German instructor. I am German but have lived for almost 30 years in Ottawa, Canada. I am a Live/In-Person Content Personality.
At the end of May, I leave for my longest vacation so far, a five-week trip…Read More
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Hi Joel, don’t know why my prior comment isn’t showing up here, but this reads very well to me. You dive deeper into the approach and process you take with your clients and I understood the value of what you have to offer clearly; and the tone is assuringly encouraging. Bravo! Say, would you give me some feedback on my latest video blog? I posted…Read More